His Favorite Amongst Flowers

His favorite amongst flowers
The pale pink running rose
This quiet still morn in wee hours
Take Rose note__he will compose

Thinking of her as he writes love
How he ardors her  petals
So soft to touch his cheek__ write of
Perfume on mind settle

Just to touch and inhale_beauty
Her beauty at day break
To steal  kiss wonderful fruity
Under rose trellis_quiver_ shake

His favorite amongst flowers
Rose that gives scented showers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 2:03 AM
a wonderful peace here Sara thank you once again duncan
Butler Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 4:12 PM
A lovely sonnet, Sara. "Just to touch and inhale beauty" a very soft, visual and romantic line. Enjoyed very much. Take care -Mike
Gibbons Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 7:16 AM
Oh, Sara please excuse me, of course your work is a sonnet; I'm absolutely nuts about sonnets so thanks so very much for this wonderful sonnet. Jim Gibbons
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October 6, 2010 at 7:12 AM
There's a sweet lilt to the verses, and the rhyming sets the poem in a special way. And thank you for your kind remarks re "Come Dance with Me" Thanks Jim Gibbons
Semeniuk Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 8:28 PM
this is a beautiful poem with some great images!
Del Fierro Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 12:57 PM
and such a lovely choice it is...the rose.....nice , jay
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 10:38 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Sara. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 5:01 AM
enjoyed reading today!!
Knop Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 4:08 AM
Enjoyed your flowery, lovely and expressive Sonnett today, Sara! Thank you for posting on Soup. Anf thank you for commenting "Summer like it once was". Have a nice week!...Gert
Eggins Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 3:32 AM
p.s thanks for the comment lol smile
Eggins Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 3:32 AM
LMAO .... just read your message had to sign in and let you know its Ann that was seventy not I ... pmsl it explained James wishing me happy birthday as well ... I am 41 lol not quite 70 yet hahaha love and hugs smile Jayne
Maverick Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 11:47 PM
sara just read this, its good inspiration for me today.
Eggins Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 9:17 PM
Dear Sara ... lovely sonnet ... thanks for the kind comment on my poem it is appreciated ... love always Jayne x
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