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His Demise

every time taking her higher him knowing she's is a lair am i gone yet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/28/2009 3:58:00 AM
I've made that mistake before. Eventually, you are gone. It truly is a road to your own demise. Simple poem, man. Well stated.
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Date: 6/26/2009 4:04:00 PM
Simple but very good.
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Date: 6/22/2009 9:14:00 AM
Nope! I don't see you gone... a perfect short take on relationships from one angle
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