His Delight Versus Her Fame

played her like a toy he had oodles of delight redundant her fame..

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2011 3:20:00 PM

HI, there, Wilma. this is cute. It is getting more and more difficult for me to find a poem of yours NEW to read. I really enjoy when I find them! LUv, Andrea

David Smalling

Date: 9/18/2010 11:05:00 PM

Romance is a game that love cannot play, for broken hearts are poor toys for passion and happiness ... yet the broken heart sings whole songs no thornbird can match, and bring new prowess to poetry.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/18/2010 5:54:00 AM

Hey Wilma, ware en betekenisvolle .. ek is regtig geniet van jou Haiku, Tanka en Senryu !!... Het tot 'n groot naweek lees! ... Gert!:)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/17/2010 3:23:00 PM

Your senryu makes me sorry for any lady that has felt this...deep write my poet partner..luv Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2010 10:00:00 AM

As the week ends I find myself reading and enjoying the many diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad to see your poetry among these Wilma. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/17/2010 8:59:00 AM

Very intriguing and unique senryu, Wilma. Unfortunately, too many women get "played." Great work, my friend. Off to Disney soon. Enjoy a wonderful weekend! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 9/17/2010 8:54:00 AM

Clever little Senyru Wilma, have a lovely weekend >> James

David Smalling

Date: 9/17/2010 7:05:00 AM

O, very musical this one ... love the rhythm of it. Thanks for reading my poems, my friend