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His Cousin's Wedding

We received the invitation, pretty card...and pretty late, for I need deepest inspiration to prepare such a debate between my husband and I: The cousin's his, and I am shy! Shy enough to need one year to decide what I could bear on my shoulders on that day: bright red dress or simple grey? That pretty card came pretty late And as I stood at our gate, staring at lovely designs, I already saw bad signs: The sky was blue... My blue dress too ! The garden green... What should it mean ? My roses grew wild tangerine And I felt more like a child, crying. O my, that pretty card was late I'll have NINE months before the date To put a colour on my dress And get my husband say me "Yes !" O my, that pretty card is late I better start with the debate Right now before he leaves his office I'm phoning him to send a kiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/25/2013 8:41:00 AM
Good morning Hanitra.
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Date: 4/7/2013 4:03:00 PM
Oh I hope you went and showed them all up. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/1/2012 6:04:00 AM
Hi Hanitra, this is a wonderful deserved winner.. enjoyed....
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 11/23/2012 2:02:00 PM
Thanks, Harry! Have a nice weekend.:) Blessings, Hanitra
Date: 10/28/2012 6:02:00 PM
Beautiful poem, I enjoyed the read, how was the wedding?
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 11/23/2012 2:06:00 PM
Er... Fiction! Writing for the contest; but I had a lot of fun! (^_^) ; Have a nice weekend! I'll try some Questionku...
Date: 10/24/2012 5:33:00 AM
Another style I am not familiar with...but I sure do like this poem. It is much deeper to me than just the color of the dress...but the color of the soul....Enjoyed !!
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 11/23/2012 2:09:00 PM
Thanks, Debra! I love the idea of a coloured soul: especially Rainbow!:) Love, Hanitra
Date: 10/2/2012 2:28:00 PM
V, , Congratulations with your fantastic entry for Joann's "My Cousin's Wedding" cheers~ xox~ PD
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/3/2012 8:15:00 AM
Thank you so much! Call me Hanitra, it's easier! Bye.:)
Date: 10/1/2012 3:22:00 PM
Congrats to you on your win in the contest, and I see I am not the only one astounded by your name!
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 11/23/2012 2:14:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Andrea! Have a nice weekend and good numerous wins as usual in your contests! Love, Hanitra
Date: 10/1/2012 7:39:00 AM
What a super win for you. Congratulations Hanitra. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2012 4:27:00 PM
Wow, I second the comment on your name..its a beauty..congrats on your win... Nice to read your work. BG
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/1/2012 2:37:00 AM
Thank you so much, Barbara! Here's really a hearty community. Love, Hanitra
Date: 9/30/2012 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win , nice one xx Gosh did your parents spare any of the letters of the alphabet in your name it must have been hard at school lol xx
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 2/24/2013 5:02:00 AM
Hi, Mandy! Just on the way to pay you a visit today. Btw, at school, many had much longer names and at that time, I didn't have the first part which is in fact my husband's family name, so... No, it was rather cool at school
Date: 9/27/2012 12:37:00 PM
Nicely written poem - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/1/2012 2:44:00 AM
Ah, here you are again! Thanks a lot, Anne-Lise. I like your community...Congratulations for your achievements up to now! Love, Hanitra

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