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his tone ~ condescending but for her own good posted on July 27, 2018

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Date: 8/5/2018 6:28:00 PM

So he says Ego She knows better than anyone

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2018 8:11:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.

Date: 7/28/2018 4:37:00 AM

I have such mixed feelings about this one, Line. But it is a lovely senryu of course.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/28/2018 10:25:00 AM

No one has the right to be condescending... ever. And it's never for anyone's own good...

Date: 7/27/2018 10:14:00 PM

Oh, a troubling situation, Line. Thank you for giving this topic your poetic voice. Well done! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 7/31/2018 1:27:00 PM

Agreed!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/28/2018 10:27:00 AM

Thanks Susan. These bullies need to be called out.

Date: 7/27/2018 8:54:00 PM

ahhh yes (for her good)

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/28/2018 10:26:00 AM

Absolutely... his way of being kind.