Hindsight 20 20
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Written 9 November 2024
Placed Second in Hindsight 20 20 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Crystol Woods
Hindsight 20: 20
With the belly swelling for days
And the stool stuck in the entrails,
For me it seemed end of sun rays
And soon I did start to derail.
As the swelling still did persist
And acute pains started to pick,
Pains that I could no more resist,
I was rushed to a cute clinic.
Urgent tests carried out on site
Revealed quite a pitiful plight:
Hernia stuck with large intestine
Both needed to be chopped in line.
I wondered: yet more surgeries!
With two major ones undergone,
Without the Lord`s divine mercy
Chance of success was quite forlorn.
Close of kin being hesitant
To agree to the surgery,
With faith in the Lord, my consent
I did convey without worry.
***********
Next day awakened by a nurse
Amidst beeps and clattering sounds
I wondered if I was on earth
Or in some aerial surrounds.
Soon after opening my eyes
I was briefed by a duty nurse
That I`d missed soaring to the sky,
But God had spared me from a curse.
To the heavens I heaved my thanks
And hummed His name without relent
For sprinkling on me His mercy
And for abating my worry.
Ever since, my faith in the Lord
Flared up like an incessant flame
And as long as I can afford
I pledged to frame hymns in His name.
On hindsight, the tough surgery
Chopped out dozens pounds of my flesh,
But drove me to the Trinity
That I could eye sunshine afresh.
Copyright © Krishnanand Guptar | Year Posted 2024
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