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Written 9 November 2024

Placed Second in Hindsight 20 20 Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Crystol Woods

Hindsight 20: 20 With the belly swelling for days And the stool stuck in the entrails, For me it seemed end of sun rays And soon I did start to derail. As the swelling still did persist And acute pains started to pick, Pains that I could no more resist, I was rushed to a cute clinic. Urgent tests carried out on site Revealed quite a pitiful plight: Hernia stuck with large intestine Both needed to be chopped in line. I wondered: yet more surgeries! With two major ones undergone, Without the Lord`s divine mercy Chance of success was quite forlorn. Close of kin being hesitant To agree to the surgery, With faith in the Lord, my consent I did convey without worry. *********** Next day awakened by a nurse Amidst beeps and clattering sounds I wondered if I was on earth Or in some aerial surrounds. Soon after opening my eyes I was briefed by a duty nurse That I`d missed soaring to the sky, But God had spared me from a curse. To the heavens I heaved my thanks And hummed His name without relent For sprinkling on me His mercy And for abating my worry. Ever since, my faith in the Lord Flared up like an incessant flame And as long as I can afford I pledged to frame hymns in His name. On hindsight, the tough surgery Chopped out dozens pounds of my flesh, But drove me to the Trinity That I could eye sunshine afresh.

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Date: 11/30/2024 12:00:00 PM
I was moved by your faith in the face of your fear... any surgery or illness that profound can cause us to realize our mortality. I'm so glad that death lost it's hold of fear on you as you grew In the strength of your faith in God! Ty for entering! Xo
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/1/2024 9:20:00 AM
I'm sorry, I assumed too much. I see now that i placed my own fear on your situation but you are correct, all that you have written here is your unwavering faith! Ty for pointing that out to me! Xo
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 11/30/2024 10:34:00 PM
Thanks poetess for appreciating the above poem and for my placement in the poetry contest sponsored by you. In fact, I was not gripped by fear at the surgery as, armed with Divine faith, I did convey my consent without worry. I was only wondering how I had to undergo another surgery, after two major ones I had endured in the recent past. Wish you a pleasant weekend.
Date: 11/16/2024 6:52:00 PM
What an experience. Congratulations for your being brave and being able to come through that painful procedure. Good luck to the contest. God bless!
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 11/17/2024 9:39:00 PM
Thanks a lot Ryan for visiting my page and appreciating the expoerience through which I underwent. May the mercy of the Lord also rest with you and those near and dear to you.

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