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Hindsight

Where we live and what we do Are choices made without a clue If we will thrive at home or work; We cannot know what problems lurk. Decisions made when we are young, Some based on plans to which we’ve clung, May work out just the way we’d hoped Despite some pitfalls never scoped. Yet other picks may not pan out And leave us filled with dread or doubt. Of those selections, most will curse them; It takes courage to reverse them. Age makes hindsight crystal clear So regrets may thus appear, But since magic we do lack, There simply is no going back.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/20/2018 10:44:00 PM
Such a wonderful rhyme, Ilene!! Perfectly penned.. An amazing rhyme! All the best to you...
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/21/2018 4:41:00 AM
Thank you, Robertina! Much appreciated...
Date: 5/16/2018 8:37:00 AM
Excellent points in this poem, Ilene. Sadly is about mistakes we never should have made and like you point out those mistakes are permanent. Thanks for reading about Mourning Doves. I wake up to them every morning here. / M
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/21/2018 4:43:00 AM
Thanks, Maurice! I usually wake up to traffic noises but at this time of year I hear city birds, too (sparrows, I guess).
Date: 5/16/2018 7:40:00 AM
Better than foresight! WAY better!! Well penned!!
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Date: 5/14/2018 5:16:00 PM
Perfectly penned Ilene and hindsight is a wonderful thing!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/14/2018 12:05:00 PM
Great words of wisdom. Nice rhythm.thanks,Ilene
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Date: 5/14/2018 10:52:00 AM
Yup! Perfectly said. Wonderful poem Ilene :) xomo!
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