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Him

Him The sight of him was so perfect His smile so bright like the sun on a hot summer day The smell of his cologne and aftershave His eyes like the oceans of Hawaii The taste of his lips were of sweet sugar The thump of his heart played like a song to me The trees seemed to dance like he was the choreographer He felt like a perfect combination of velvet and saw dust Not too soft, but not too rough And everything I heard from him was like a melody. He never worried about being someone else He never let me think I wasn't the one It was just me and him against the world My parents admired him I admired him He was my safety He was my home He is and will always be my person Him

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Date: 5/10/2018 2:12:00 PM
This is the first time I have seen your works and this is beautiful! Congrats on your win in this contest! I will be reading your other writings here soon when I get the time :)~Hugs~ Pailey
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Date: 5/10/2018 1:20:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. Nice entrance... Congrats on your top win, Harley.
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Date: 5/10/2018 12:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this loving and heartfelt poem. Enjoyed.
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Date: 4/17/2018 9:21:00 AM
This sounds like the heart of a happy person :) I hope it is. Lovely write Harley!
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