Hiku 11

life's rustic roads wind wildly in wacky ways ~ a bumpy ride

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/26/2023 4:33:00 AM

Very lovely!

Michelle Smith

Date: 8/11/2023 1:06:00 AM

:-D

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/8/2023 7:18:00 AM

I like the use of metaphors in this one. Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/7/2023 4:27:00 PM

Indeed, you have meticulously expounded upon the myriad fascinating aspects pertaining to roads, where gusts of wind whimsically sway and meander, resulting in a delightfully turbulent journey. Congrats on your win

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/7/2023 3:13:00 PM

Yes. Congrats. God bless you. Love, Gina

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/7/2023 12:06:00 PM

Oh so true how the ride can be bumpy. Great poem!

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 8/6/2023 9:29:00 PM

Oh, life, yep! Great haiku Joanna!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2023 9:28:00 AM

I really enjoyed seeing this one!