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hiku - connection

gazing at the bee f l i t t i n g f l o w e r to f l o w e r m a k i n g d a i s y c h a i n s

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Jcb Brul

Date: 5/5/2025 4:45:00 AM

i love it! This is so cute!! I could picture the busy bee flitting from flower to flower like i am also gazing at it aside grom the poet. Congratulations. ^___^ JCB

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/6/2025 5:31:00 AM

Aww your comment is so lovely! Thank you :) I'm happy you could picture the scene! It's so nice just sitting gently watching bumblebees go from flower to flower :)

Sand Blown

Date: 5/4/2025 3:23:00 PM

verrry.....nice.......wowza idea.......len

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/6/2025 5:30:00 AM

Thank you so much - glad you liked it :)