Highway

on a slippery highway~ opportunities ceased~ with a loud bang Alexis Y. 11/12/2020

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John Watt

Date: 11/15/2020 7:46:00 PM

Well done, I hope this was not describing an unfortunate event in your life. Blessings, my friend ~ John

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/15/2020 8:03:00 PM

Thank you so much. No, it's fiction. I originally wrote it for Brian's Monoku contest. But I decided to go with another. I appreciate your inquiring, though. Have a good evening, my friend:-) Alexis

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/13/2020 7:10:00 AM

I just hope they survived so expressive, a complete story in 10 words, Bravo Alexis my friend. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/13/2020 5:14:00 AM

This is also quite well expressed.

Silent One

Date: 11/13/2020 2:52:00 AM

Nice one Alexis!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/12/2020 12:03:00 PM

- Always drive carefully, Alexis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/12/2020 11:39:00 AM

Happened her last night, one Corvette, two young soldiers dead. Aloha! Rico

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/12/2020 7:22:00 AM

Yikes, can just see the pile up. Winter is coming. Tom