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Haiku refocus the dalliance of the muse into a moment John G. Lawless ©6/9/2023

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Date: 6/11/2023 6:00:00 PM
All I can say is that this haiku stands on its own as phenomenal, John. Bravo, gw
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Date: 6/10/2023 12:14:00 PM
Cool beans, John.
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Date: 6/9/2023 6:46:00 AM
My first kudos go to you, dear John, for always saying what you mean no matter what anyone may have to say about it. You will always be a hero to me. Second kudos to you, Dilly, for taking to task those who dare rebuke you for wanting to add a little zest to poetry life with your method of holding a contest. You also deserve credit for seeing through the Phony Facade (Tania's poem) of those who claim to be friend, who are actually foe.
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Date: 6/9/2023 7:31:00 AM
Living a happy life should never involve tit for tat differences.
Date: 6/9/2023 6:08:00 AM
ha ha ha i especially love 'dalliance; a lovely tribute to dear dilly dally and long may she continue to buck the trend, its what keeps poetry fresh and new:-) hugs jan xx
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