High Ku

Haiku refocus the dalliance of the muse into a moment John G. Lawless ©6/9/2023

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/11/2023 6:00:00 PM

All I can say is that this haiku stands on its own as phenomenal, John. Bravo, gw

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2023 12:14:00 PM

Cool beans, John.

Lin Lane

Date: 6/9/2023 6:46:00 AM

My first kudos go to you, dear John, for always saying what you mean no matter what anyone may have to say about it. You will always be a hero to me. Second kudos to you, Dilly, for taking to task those who dare rebuke you for wanting to add a little zest to poetry life with your method of holding a contest. You also deserve credit for seeing through the Phony Facade (Tania's poem) of those who claim to be friend, who are actually foe.

Lin Lane
Date: 6/9/2023 7:31:00 AM

Living a happy life should never involve tit for tat differences.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/9/2023 7:07:00 AM

Thanks Lin, I'm not involved in any tit for tat - just live and let live. No one has done me any harm. I'm not sure me and the poetry police will see eye to eye, but I don't hold any malice. With regards to everyone else who offered supportive words I'm grateful and took them all at face value. Thanks again.

Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/9/2023 6:13:00 AM

I may have done a little dance of joy reading this - although I'm sure any correlation with recent events is purely coincidental :)

Lin Lane
Date: 6/9/2023 6:47:00 AM

Dance away, Dilly! Jan and I will join you!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/9/2023 6:08:00 AM

ha ha ha i especially love 'dalliance; a lovely tribute to dear dilly dally and long may she continue to buck the trend, its what keeps poetry fresh and new:-) hugs jan xx

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/9/2023 6:14:00 AM

Aww, I'm feeling the love Jan x