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High Atop a Windswept Hill

High atop a mountain, a windswept hill I thought I'd found my true love, name of Jill We arched our backs and kissed I thought I heard a 'Pssst' My wife?! ~ Her lawyer will send me the bill

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Date: 7/19/2022 3:45:00 AM
I hope you send this one to Jill so she can admire it.
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Date: 7/17/2022 3:37:00 PM
I bet that blew you away, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/17/2022 6:15:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha! Cute comment there, Shirley. ~ From my hospital bed, wrapped head-to-toe in shame
Date: 7/16/2022 12:15:00 PM
Oh oh… sounds expensive, Gershon. Tell her the thin air and altitude went to your head. Ha ha!
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Date: 7/17/2022 6:11:00 PM
That was a good suggestion, Terry... Anyway, it was Coors time. All forgotten and forgiven. ~ Burp
Date: 7/16/2022 9:30:00 AM
LOL! I bet!
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Date: 7/17/2022 6:09:00 PM
How much you betting, by the way?! lol.
Date: 7/15/2022 3:22:00 PM
Lol. Hope everything worked out for all parties Gershon but I think in this one it was an expensive lesson. Enjoy your weekend Gershon and good luck with the wife...lol
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Date: 7/17/2022 6:10:00 PM
It did work out for all parties, Michael. We just partied until we dropped -- all the way down the mountain...
Date: 7/15/2022 2:14:00 PM
Oh my... I hope things work out... have the best day ever... Ann
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Date: 7/17/2022 6:09:00 PM
Things always work out. As for how, a different question. lol. Thanks, Ann
Date: 7/15/2022 11:13:00 AM
Shame shame Gershon lol! Hope you are having a pleasant day :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/17/2022 6:06:00 PM
I WAS having a pleasant day, 'til the wife showed up! :) gw
Date: 7/15/2022 9:27:00 AM
I suspect when you get back You'll find she hasn't left you Jack. So sorry 'bout your marriage fail, Your conduct though? Beyond the pail. :-)
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Date: 7/17/2022 6:04:00 PM
What marriage fail? I still have six wives left. lol. :) gw
Date: 7/15/2022 7:20:00 AM
Yep!! I expect the bill will be delivered. LOL..Sense of humor goes a long way. Thanks for the visit to my page. I have been missing you. Sara
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/17/2022 6:01:00 PM
Sara -- 'Shh!' Can't let our discreet affair out of the bag, you know! ~ 006
Date: 7/15/2022 5:09:00 AM
That's what you get for listening to the wind GW! Good one, Happy Friday!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/17/2022 6:00:00 PM
I should have worn earplugs, I guess, eh Mike?! Thanks for the chuckle, gw
Date: 7/14/2022 10:41:00 PM
hahaha , good one, Gershon... Many Blessings friend
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/16/2022 9:13:00 PM
Glad you got a smile out of this one, Eve. Laughter and Levity, Gershon

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