High Atop a Windswept Hill

High atop a mountain, a windswept hill
I thought I'd found my true love, name of Jill
   We arched our backs and kissed
   I thought I heard a 'Pssst'
My wife?! ~ Her lawyer will send me the bill
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 3:45 AM
I hope you send this one to Jill so she can admire it.
Hawkins Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 3:37 PM
I bet that blew you away, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 6:15 PM
Ha, ha, ha! Cute comment there, Shirley. ~ From my hospital bed, wrapped head-to-toe in shame
Flood Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 12:15 PM
Oh oh… sounds expensive, Gershon. Tell her the thin air and altitude went to your head. Ha ha!
Wolf Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 6:11 PM
That was a good suggestion, Terry... Anyway, it was Coors time. All forgotten and forgiven. ~ Burp
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 9:30 AM
LOL! I bet!
Wolf Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 6:09 PM
How much you betting, by the way?! lol.
Tor Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 3:22 PM
Lol. Hope everything worked out for all parties Gershon but I think in this one it was an expensive lesson. Enjoy your weekend Gershon and good luck with the wife...lol
Wolf Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 6:10 PM
It did work out for all parties, Michael. We just partied until we dropped -- all the way down the mountain...
Foster Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 2:14 PM
Oh my... I hope things work out... have the best day ever... Ann
Wolf Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 6:09 PM
Things always work out. As for how, a different question. lol. Thanks, Ann
Thomas Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 11:13 AM
Shame shame Gershon lol! Hope you are having a pleasant day :)
Wolf Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 6:06 PM
I WAS having a pleasant day, 'til the wife showed up! :) gw
Kyser Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 9:27 AM
I suspect when you get back You'll find she hasn't left you Jack. So sorry 'bout your marriage fail, Your conduct though? Beyond the pail. :-)
Wolf Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 6:04 PM
What marriage fail? I still have six wives left. lol. :) gw
Kendrick Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 7:20 AM
Yep!! I expect the bill will be delivered. LOL..Sense of humor goes a long way. Thanks for the visit to my page. I have been missing you. Sara
Wolf Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 6:01 PM
Sara -- 'Shh!' Can't let our discreet affair out of the bag, you know! ~ 006
Gentile Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 5:09 AM
That's what you get for listening to the wind GW! Good one, Happy Friday!!
Wolf Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 6:00 PM
I should have worn earplugs, I guess, eh Mike?! Thanks for the chuckle, gw
Roper Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 10:41 PM
hahaha , good one, Gershon... Many Blessings friend
Wolf Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 9:13 PM
Glad you got a smile out of this one, Eve. Laughter and Levity, Gershon
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