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Hiding Place

With brisk - north - wind; lakeside trees yield along flowered banks and open green field. Where mountains shed their waters down and from harsh elements they shield. Crisp- cold- water flows soft with wind sudden breeze dips, reflections bend. Placid depiction that dreams only view for this moment, mind does transcend. Shanties sprawl along mountain base nestled among evergreen that encase. Splendor with nature; all its rudiment God did so artistically face. Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey Third Place Winner ~ "Any 2011 Poem" Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand Jan. 2, 2012 Second Place Winner ~ "Use Rubaiyat Form" Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Freeman May 13, 2011

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Date: 2/27/2019 12:11:00 AM
excellent poem; enjoyed I
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Date: 3/2/2012 10:06:00 PM
CARYL..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 1/6/2012 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carol
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Date: 1/6/2012 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations Caryl on your outstanding write. Have a great day. Jon
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Date: 1/6/2012 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/29/2011 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/27/2011 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Caryl
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:46:00 AM
Many Congrats Caryl on your super win with this wonderful piece on nature's beauty.Love, gautami
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:13:00 AM
Great to see you at the top with this lovely poem Caryl. Congratulations on your special entry's second place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/27/2011 3:32:00 AM
Thjis hiding place is pure magic. many congrats.
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Date: 4/26/2011 3:38:00 PM
Very original images of the shanties sprawled along the mountain base, Caryl. There is no artist like our Lord. Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/26/2011 1:06:00 PM
Many congrats on your big win : )
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with your outstanding poetry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:13:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your 2nd place win in John's contest with this perfect poem using new form.. awesome entry..enjoy your top spot with luv..
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations Caryl on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:54:00 AM
Many congratulations on your second place win Caryl (((( applause )))) well done.....:) smiles
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Date: 4/26/2011 10:51:00 AM
Beautiful, Caryl. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
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Date: 4/17/2011 10:45:00 AM
and so it is, caryl.. flowing, spirited sentiments with lots of winning luck to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/13/2011 10:37:00 AM
I am reading such diverse poems here at PoetrySoup. Poet's hearts are bleeding poetry today. That is where the best poetry comes from. It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Caryl. Continue to write and share it and I will be back to read it. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2011 9:14:00 AM
Elegant and exquisite lines Caryl and a breathtaking view expressed in your lines.. good luck in John's contest .. luv..
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Date: 4/12/2011 10:38:00 PM
beautiful Caryl. Loved its images and beauty.
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Date: 4/12/2011 9:33:00 PM
How nicely done, Caryl. There are so many new contests recently, I simply cannot keep up. I also enjoyed the title of this. It would be splendid to come upon a special hiding place like this one you describe.
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Date: 4/12/2011 8:04:00 PM
a great write, enjoyed reading it.
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