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Hiding Place.

in those raging flames of your eyes that i find the calmness of dewdrops, in those burning arms that turn my craziness into obsession, in those sizzling whispers and gasps that have plundered my heart, in those chimes of your ankles and the glimmer of your bangles that do not let me sleep, in the deep blue darkness that i only get to see your face, i want to hide be hid in a world so wide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/19/2009 5:58:00 AM
Very passionate write. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 6/25/2009 1:21:00 PM
Really can relate to this poem, the first line just had me captured, fantastic write, thankyou for your comments on my work, take care and love, Jo xx
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Date: 6/16/2009 3:36:00 PM
sensual,passionate write-a place of refuge,a place of safety--there you hide...we all search our refuge,i can relate--beautiful my talented friend-----charma
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Date: 6/16/2009 8:31:00 AM
true sexuality, very well done and touched those feelings that are so private.
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Date: 6/16/2009 5:41:00 AM
Loved your hmmm comment on my Lusciuos Piece...I had just read someone elses verse on culinary treats LOL...if we can't go hmmmmm once in awhile our brain matter will freeze up! Your verse above has so much love in it! Lucky women there! Light & Love
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