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Hide and Peek

Let’s play hide and go peek said the horse. It was a great suggestion I agreed of course. Because I did not know that he had said peek. In my mind I had heard hide and go seek. He threw himself down into the crook of an oak. I thought it was funny. He looked like a joke. Go and hide he said raising his head to peek. Breaking all the rules of hide and go seek. I ran to the shed, got into the barn. I waited for the horse, I knitted some yarn. The horse never came. But along came the pup. Come help she barked. The horse can’t get up!

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Date: 11/21/2019 7:54:00 PM
lol...love that ending... this poem was very well created, adorable :) hugs
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/21/2019 8:23:00 PM
It was so much fun to do!
Date: 11/21/2019 2:28:00 PM
well written Caren...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/21/2019 8:23:00 PM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 11/21/2019 10:59:00 AM
Fun, creative poem. Well done Caren :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/21/2019 1:05:00 PM
It was fun to write.
Date: 11/21/2019 8:35:00 AM
Love this one, Caren. So much imagination you have dear friend. It's a great rhyme. Love to you, Gina
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/21/2019 1:05:00 PM
Thank you Gina.
Date: 11/20/2019 11:54:00 PM
Lol I enjoyed this one. Thanks for sharing Caren
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/21/2019 1:46:00 AM
Thank you Gregory.

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