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I watch her silhouette and heart penetrating pulses quiver caressing the deepest contours of my mind raw, full, unabated radiating biting amorously upon my native pine I call her comfort and whisper willingness of the utmost kind I see her naked taking her places we dare not hide

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Susan Lawrence

Date: 8/13/2023 8:14:00 AM

Haunting , sensual , raw and inviting TS . So much emotion and longing conveyed in a few words . I want to read more ! Susan :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 6/20/2023 11:03:00 PM

Wow… damn that’s all I can say after that rather storing piece! ;) loved it!

Sally Eslinger

Date: 3/4/2023 4:06:00 AM

OMG, Now here is poetry! antastic to come ypon you & yiur poetry thru your commeent elsewhere, This em is strikingm filled with the sensual, the emotional, the intenselyy descriptive, the mysterious, straight forth from a distinctive voice beckoning its poet to communicate. A Fav. Love this. Great to meet you. sally

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/24/2023 3:08:00 PM

Amourous, I reckon! Hello Tim. great to read you again. I hope life has been treating you well.

Lin Lane

Date: 2/24/2023 12:31:00 PM

You haven't missed one rhythmic beat of your sensual writing skill. Nice to read you again, T. Arthur posted one last night. It's like old home week. ;)