Hidden Wings:

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Show me sweet angel into the other realm,
Show me what I think I know, and what I think not,
Guide me through places where I would be lost,
Teach me your wisdom and nurse me through,
For I am an infant compared to you.
Whisper what you must so that others don't hear,
Sing to me songs that the angels hear,
Watch over me closely so I feel you near,
And when it's time to leave will you wait for me?
And explain if you will things like destiny,
And before we part can I have my wings?
Then teach me how to fly amongst other things,
Then wish me well for I know you shall,
Be moving on to a higher realm.
Then I can do what you used to,
And guide others when my time is due,
Repaying my thanks by being like you.
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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/25/2018 11:52:00 PM

A FAVE. Love this gem, White Wolf.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/28/2016 10:28:00 PM

Hidden wisdom in this lovely poem, Rick. Very well done, my friend. I give it a 7 even. Stay blessed my friend. Much love to you.

White Wolf
Date: 10/28/2016 11:06:00 PM

You won't say that after you read my latest post I don't think RW. Haha. /|\

Morgen Farmer

Date: 9/22/2016 6:08:00 PM

"Show me sweet angel into the other realm, Show me what I think I know, and what I think not, Guide me through places where I would be lost, Teach me your wisdom and nurse me through," We all can relate to this. Thank you for sharing Rick.

White Wolf
Date: 9/22/2016 11:32:00 PM

Thank you for that, Morgen.