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love is a lofty ideal croon of tenderness sounds right, feels good but how may we share what we do not have a hollow emptiness engulfs our body-mind womb of space suffocates we are uncomfortable in our own skin being empowered we pause the cause of our heart contractions by befriending silence refuge of our soul we are extracted from our ambedo trance brutally by the tongs of ego drawing attention back to cravings of form yes, we live here negation will not help escapism is not the cure so we must discover the absolute truth discerning mind is what we first employ because that is what we have so we rapidly comprehend head-heart discord the thinking mind merely navigates life but it is the radiant heart that pulsates with love the joy soul seeks mind oscillates but love is steady thus we deem as logical to meld mind in heart to feel complete we test the waters and find love is the way being the language of God but we must first forgive all those who deceive yes, we suffer loss by close ones betrayed yet as a nonchalant witness we surrender outcomes to will divine sublime God is easily pleased He delights at our ascent so awakens in us Holy Spirit transmuting feeble form into eternal living light the false falls away we now see who we are the Self made in His image resplendent with light in the cave of heart ego that never was a mere bubble of delusion bursts noiselessly in the void now there is no one here save the light of Self love, light and bliss pulsates day and night the ignition renewal continual hidden thus in plain sight is our open secret

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Date: 1/13/2024 10:55:00 AM
Your verses unfold like a profound journey, navigating the realms of love and self with poetic grace. The exploration of the struggle to find love within and the harmony of mind and heart resonates deeply. The contrast between the ego's noise and the divine light within is depicted with striking clarity...
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Date: 1/13/2024 6:47:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One. I’m so happy you found value in these words
Date: 1/13/2024 7:25:00 AM
So true, love is the language of God. Your lack of punctuation allows for various interpretations of the verse - well done, well done! I may try that myself - mm
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Date: 1/13/2024 8:53:00 AM
Thank you, Mark :)
Date: 1/13/2024 6:27:00 AM
Seeker, excellent writing! I think lots of people, like me, have been hurt by love, even rejected, so to protect our ego's we withdraw into a self made prison of sorts. It takes a lot of courage to reach out to find love, again ... and there are many kinds of love to be found, family, friends, pets, and of course a lover, even love of poetry, art and books- though those last three loves are solitary usually but still worthy, blessings, Constance
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Date: 1/13/2024 6:29:00 AM
So happy these words resonate in your glowing heart, dear Constance
Date: 1/13/2024 6:11:00 AM
I enjoyed the train of thought that came as I progressed through each verse. Such dense verses, much to ponder and put together. Grateful for the soulful challenge today. Have a pleasant weekend, Sara
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Date: 1/13/2024 6:30:00 AM
Thank you, Sara dear

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