Hidden Beauty

Can there be beauty in my toes,
Where stubbornly a fungus grows?

I never thought it could be true.
I try to hide it with my shoe.

Its purpose, not yet discovered—
I try hard to keep it covered.

From large toe to the next it spread,
And now I look at both with dread.

It wants to grow against the norm,
My toenail with misshapen form,

Knows the wild ways it wants to grow,
And now it has a mate in tow!

I’ve vowed to make a sacred oath
To kill this hated fungal growth,

But I now see the beauty of
My wayward toes denied of love

Are like the people we might hate
And I’ve learned to appreciate

Diversity against the norm,
Well taught to me through my toes’ form;

That each of us must be unique,
And there’s the beauty that I seek!

As my fungal toe and its mate,
Which I condemned as reprobate,

Conceals within their ugly form,
Their freedom’s right against the norm!

© 1-18-15       ~First Place~
For Hidden Beauty Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

*Meant as a metaphor for those who don't appear as normal looking!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 3:20 AM
Thanks for reminding me of this gem Connie, who would have thought toe fungus would be a subject to get top honours but YOU did it lol:lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 7:48 PM
Rhonda said she wanted something really original so that thought came to me about writing about something most would not think of writing about. Thanks Jan. : )
La France Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 6:27 PM
Connie, your poem is a fun write, congrats on your placement and thanks for visiting my poem, a day. . .
Guzzi Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 7:08 PM
You made me smile BUT I'd take that pill LOL - it would drive me crazy looking at them! Light & Love
A  Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 10:46 AM
Connie, ~ Congratulations on the win. *Skat LOVE*
Lamoureux Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 8:44 AM
It was fun to reread this one Connie.
Callus Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 6:57 AM
It's lovely to come back with congratulations, Connie!! Have a lovely weekend. hugs // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 12:10 AM
Thank you very much Paul. I loved your entry much better.
Guzzi Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 8:38 PM
Too funny Connie! Congrad's Light & Love
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 3:42 PM
Thank you Debbie. I hesitated posting this one as it is not a subject I enjoy speaking of, but now I am glad I posted it. Haha. Hugs, Connie
Curtis Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 7:59 PM
I have heard of thinking outside the Box, but Gee Connie, you think inside the shoe. I love those writers that just write what comes to them.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 12:26 AM
Thank you Jerry.I was trying to give her something original. Not the best subject for sure. Thanks for your kind comment. Cheers, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 2:26 PM
Yay for you. I see Vicky telling you congrats on a first place. That is so cool, Connie. BIG congrats.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 3:35 PM
Thanks Andrea. Congrats to you too. Who wants to thi k about ugly toes, but that is what came to me. I am very surprised to see it get top honors. Guess I think outside the box. Lol
Allison Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 11:18 AM
I hate my feet Connie they are small and wide lol - brilliant write - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 3:45 PM
I think I picked this up at 24 hr. Fitness where I go to swim. Not fun. Thanks Jan. I am very pleasantly surprised at getting top honors. Cheers, Connie
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 11:09 AM
Congrats Connie on win. Love
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 3:36 PM
Oh, thank you very much Rajat.
Hicks Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 5:24 PM
I love how one can find beauty in the mundane and common place - if that is not a signature of youth I don't know what is. To think deeply on what is, on the surface, simple... maybe someday I'll take your advice and write an Ode to Nose Hair... lol.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 1:30 AM
Haha Tim. Well she said she would give extra points for originality so I got carried away. Thanks for saying I have youth. I guess I will always remain young at heart. I appreciate your comment. Hugs, Connie
Deschler Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 11:51 PM
Sometimes, we do need to look a bit deeper to discover the true beauty in all things... A very creative poem with wonderful couplet rhyming. Very nicely written, Connie. Good luck in Rhonda's contest!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 2:28 AM
Thank you very much Kelly.
Yamin Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 8:07 PM
Hi Connie, An amazing poem, beautifully rhyming. I like the conclusion most. Thanks for visiting my Tanka the Forlorn and for your appreciation. Happy New Year -Mohammad
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 11:52 PM
thanks for finding my poem on this topic too. I don't feel it is one of my best poems. I wish I could get more inspired lately!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 3:14 AM
Nature inspires me Andrea. The full and new moon helps too.
Fraser Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 1:35 PM
Blimey! what a coincidence. Since I played Soccer when I was younger I always had trouble with my big toenails, so much they had to come off. Then they grew back, one ok, the other like a talon, which falls off every eighteen months. Yep, I relate to this poem totally. Cool write Connie, James :) :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 5:58 PM
I thank you James and can relate. Not an easy fix. Cheers, Connie
Adams Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 11:48 AM
Delightful, Connie. LOL
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 5:59 PM
Thanks so much Cona. Very nice to meet you. Aloha, Connie
Sirak Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 2:58 PM
I love this one! I don't have pretty dainty feet, and my toes are all wonky but I don't care. I hate shoes and go barefoot whenever I can. I just don't paint my toenails so I don't draw attention to them.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 6:40 PM
Everyone has something about themselves they don't like, but I think we become more accepting as we age. I know I have. Glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks so much. Hugs, Connie
Kiser Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 2:46 PM
That's the first toe poem, I have ever read. Quite entertaining.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 2:53 PM
Thank you M.L. I am beginning to cringe at writing it, but I did it because Rhonda wanted something original. Hugs, Connie
Smith Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 4:25 AM
Very clever! And I love the message, being one who never wears sandles.. Second toe longer than the first.. I hate that!! Lol.. Guess I have to learn to embrace the uniqueness.. Hugs, my friend.. Arlene
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 2:55 PM
Thank you very much Arlene. Polish helps cover it, but after months of treatment it is still there. They are stubborn. Hugs, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 11:31 PM
wow, Connie, this was super interesting. I never see you write too often this way. It's also kind of humorous, and I think you can SO write that way!! I hope I can be inventive as you in this particular contest!! Oh about KFC. that was an old poem I probably put on PFT years ago. It was for the humorous contest/
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 6:07 PM
Thanks Andrea. I was trying to give her something original. I just felt like entering her contest and became inspired to write this. I will look for yours. Hugs, Connie
Lindley Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 7:15 PM
Beauty sometimes dwells even in a beast. For often we miss much because of our prejudices. When if searched deeper we find beauty in things we first reject. More love and kindness with less hate leads to a happier life. Bravo, your poem is great, now see a doctor--ugly toes just grossly blows..lol
Dunn Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 5:13 PM
Mighty fine work here my friend, I'm sure your cue this melody lol thanks for the sharing, it's well composed and concealed I'm sure of that but summer is coming and sandles will be worn exposing the tender loving healing, thanks for your fine comments and I'm happy to have gotten my life time membership, cheri
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 9:54 PM
Thank you Cheri. I appreciate your kind comments. Aloha, Connie
Richards Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 3:26 PM
This makes me smile, for the fact that you picked the most unlikely subject, and made a lovely poem !! How clever are you !!! Only you could make a toenail fungus uniquely charming !!! lol !! Great job, Connie !
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 9:57 PM
Thanks so much Carrie. Wasnt sure what my ending was going to be when I began writing it. Lol. I appreciate your kind comments, cheers, Connie
Pinet Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 10:47 AM
Your word choice is good and the message sent and the method used (although not conventional), is strong and emotional. Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 10:00 PM
Thank you so much Emile. I am a fan of your poetry. Blessings, Connie
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