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in a lush meadow where young hares are frolicking. . . large slithering snakes Written Feb. 13, 2017 for the H Forms Contest of Broken Wings!

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Robert Warlov

Date: 6/1/2017 2:42:00 PM

shocking contrast. Stephen King fan?

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/1/2017 9:06:00 PM

you better believe it! Thanks for reading. I have to get upstairs but will check out your poetry tomorrow!!

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 2/19/2017 8:06:00 PM

a true nature haiku, "slithering" is such a descriptive word. Congratulations on your placement, Andrea. Well-deserved.

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 2/18/2017 11:31:00 PM

Great! Congrats!

Constance La France

Date: 2/18/2017 1:07:00 PM

Andrea congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem and I love the image too

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 2/18/2017 9:30:00 AM

Excellent, Andrea: Congratulations. Life has that hidden element of danger everywhere. FAVING this. Hugs, SuZ

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/18/2017 8:26:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea, another fine win...

John Michaels

Date: 2/18/2017 6:41:00 AM

Nice... good lead up and a great turn. Congratulations on your win!

Paul Callus

Date: 2/18/2017 6:10:00 AM

Unseen....but I can feel the danger lurking! Very clever, Andrea. Congratulations on placing first; a merited win. Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/18/2017 5:49:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Andrea!

Joseph May

Date: 2/18/2017 3:11:00 AM

Congrats on a great win Andrea

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/17/2017 2:37:00 PM

Thank you Andrea I enjoyed this poem.I enjoyed this Haiku you wrote.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/17/2017 6:11:00 AM

Oh that's good.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/16/2017 10:39:00 PM

Loved the poem, and the photo made me smile, no wondering they are jumping, all those snakes!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/16/2017 6:28:00 PM

A wonderful haiku, Andrea... love the rabbits, hate the snakes!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/16/2017 3:09:00 AM

Excellent!

Ali Pran

Date: 2/15/2017 2:48:00 PM

Brilliant! :)

Jennifer Walker

Date: 2/15/2017 1:05:00 PM

Wow, I hate snakes and I didn't see this coming at all.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/15/2017 5:40:00 AM

Captivating, dear Andrea! A seven and good luck!

Eve Roper

Date: 2/14/2017 11:20:00 PM

Oh:'( I have snakes poor rabbits happy Valentine's hugs

Joseph May

Date: 2/14/2017 8:08:00 PM

Very nice Haiku Andrea...Good luck in thre contest

James Horn

Date: 2/14/2017 7:18:00 PM

Who have made mistakes, Also were politicking And slithered away. Sentimental snakes; In precarious positions Became so slimy. Sliministic snakes. Wow. Jim

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/14/2017 7:10:00 PM

Another beautiful and intriguing work about the the happiness we see and the things lurking beneath the surface. It's on target as per usual!!

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/14/2017 7:08:00 PM

Nice haiku! You stuck to the American 575 format which is all to the good! I liked your Bugs bunny photo as well! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/14/2017 5:41:00 PM

And there is that aha moment you are so good at portraying Andrea! Excellent!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/14/2017 2:04:00 PM

Your haiku definitely has a turn!