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in a lush meadow where young hares are frolicking. . . large slithering snakes Written Feb. 13, 2017 for the H Forms Contest of Broken Wings!

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Date: 6/1/2017 2:42:00 PM
shocking contrast. Stephen King fan?
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/1/2017 9:06:00 PM
you better believe it! Thanks for reading. I have to get upstairs but will check out your poetry tomorrow!!
Date: 2/19/2017 8:06:00 PM
a true nature haiku, "slithering" is such a descriptive word. Congratulations on your placement, Andrea. Well-deserved.
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Date: 2/18/2017 11:31:00 PM
Great! Congrats!
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Date: 2/18/2017 1:07:00 PM
Andrea congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem and I love the image too
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Date: 2/18/2017 9:30:00 AM
Excellent, Andrea: Congratulations. Life has that hidden element of danger everywhere. FAVING this. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 2/18/2017 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea, another fine win...
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Date: 2/18/2017 6:41:00 AM
Nice... good lead up and a great turn. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/18/2017 6:10:00 AM
Unseen....but I can feel the danger lurking! Very clever, Andrea. Congratulations on placing first; a merited win. Regards // paul
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Date: 2/18/2017 5:49:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea!
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Date: 2/18/2017 3:11:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 2/17/2017 2:37:00 PM
Thank you Andrea I enjoyed this poem.I enjoyed this Haiku you wrote.
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Date: 2/17/2017 6:11:00 AM
Oh that's good.
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Date: 2/16/2017 10:39:00 PM
Loved the poem, and the photo made me smile, no wondering they are jumping, all those snakes!
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Date: 2/16/2017 6:28:00 PM
A wonderful haiku, Andrea... love the rabbits, hate the snakes!
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Date: 2/16/2017 3:09:00 AM
Excellent!
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Date: 2/15/2017 2:48:00 PM
Brilliant! :)
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Date: 2/15/2017 1:05:00 PM
Wow, I hate snakes and I didn't see this coming at all.
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Date: 2/15/2017 5:40:00 AM
Captivating, dear Andrea! A seven and good luck!
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Date: 2/14/2017 11:20:00 PM
Oh:'( I have snakes poor rabbits happy Valentine's hugs
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Date: 2/14/2017 8:08:00 PM
Very nice Haiku Andrea...Good luck in thre contest
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Date: 2/14/2017 7:18:00 PM
Who have made mistakes, Also were politicking And slithered away. Sentimental snakes; In precarious positions Became so slimy. Sliministic snakes. Wow. Jim
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Date: 2/14/2017 7:10:00 PM
Another beautiful and intriguing work about the the happiness we see and the things lurking beneath the surface. It's on target as per usual!!
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Date: 2/14/2017 7:08:00 PM
Nice haiku! You stuck to the American 575 format which is all to the good! I liked your Bugs bunny photo as well! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/14/2017 5:41:00 PM
And there is that aha moment you are so good at portraying Andrea! Excellent!
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Date: 2/14/2017 2:04:00 PM
Your haiku definitely has a turn!
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