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Premiere Contest WinnerHickory Sunrise

The morning's first cup is sweetest, rich and hot, 
as I look through my kitchen window at the hickory.

The low branches will come off first.

Once upon a time I'd climb it, perch atop the high branches,
then in the throes of leafing, to gaze unfettered at the land.

Should take the day to get them all,
put them through the chipper.

Dawn creeps upon October's harvested plain,
sun igniting pumpkin flames in the lazy creek that bends at the tree,
early mist caressing damp carob earth.

The trunk will come later this week.

Dew-stained fences meander idle tracts of shorn fields, 
air pungent with hay, apples and barley.

Etched against apricot clouds spread in lemon sky
strides the hickory, alive with orange light
and bustling with wrens and robins, 
far off roosters crowing morning prayers.

The stump will be out before the first snow.
We'll be moved to town for winter by then,
won't hear the wind crying over memories.
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Ravidas Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 11:26 AM
Oh, those eyes! Wonderful.
Cozart Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 11:29 AM
Thank you, Kurt.
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 4:06 PM
wow, so beautiful. I am assuming this was a win with one of Brian's contests? Not sure, but big congrats on a very well deserved trophy win!! The ending makes one want to sigh.
Gentry Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 3:22 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win. A most profound, interesting, beautifully written poem.
Cozart Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 7:29 AM
Thanks, Susan.
Hamilton Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 1:22 PM
This is sooo good Dale, I feel a profound sadness for the tree, never felt that before, a testament to your talent. Congrats on a deserved trophy win!
Cozart Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 1:52 PM
Thank you very much, John.
Haight Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 9:16 PM
Beautifully written and so nostalgically heartfelt, Dale. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy win! Sandra
Cozart Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Thanks very much, Sandra.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 4:10 PM
The way this beauty is composed tugged at my heartstrings as it grew richer and richer becoming profound in melancholic nostalgia causing tears to well up in my eyes Dale. You are a master poet and certainly deserve your outstanding trophy win! Congratulations my friend! A Fave!: )
Cozart Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 4:29 PM
AW, thanks so much, Connie.
Sands Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 3:18 PM
Excellent! I really love this. Congratulations for your win :)
Cozart Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 4:29 PM
Thank you, Heidi.
Gauthier Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Lovely imagery and melodic rhythm, Dale. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win.
Cozart Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 11:02 AM
Thank you very much, Line.
Barden Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 3:12 AM
Wonderfully beautiful and melancholy write, Dale, on every level ... this has all the elements of the best of poetry, put together like an Anthony Bourdain Master Class, with a texture and taste for every palate ... exquisite, and going in my favs! (And italics, too! I'm teasing you, my friend!). All the best! :-)
Cozart Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 7:38 AM
Thanks so much, Greg.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 2:13 AM
Wow <3
Cozart Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Thanks, Maureen.
Watson Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 1:00 AM
What an amazing description, Dale. It drew me in from the first sip right up to the cockerel's crow!
Cozart Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Than you, Wendy.
Godwin Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 9:45 PM
You paint both a picture and a feel with subtle yet impact-strong imagery. I am especially in love with the 2nd to last stanza - just divine. Congrats on the gold, take it to town and don't let the wind be told. All the best to you and your pen ... CayCay
Cozart Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 7:40 AM
Thank you, CayCay.
Gentile Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 8:58 AM
This is so beautiful Dale and the last line I felt the deepest. Just excellent!!
Cozart Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 9:37 AM
Thanks very much, Mike.
Kiser Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 11:48 PM
Ooh, I feel that fall wind with this one; beautiful.
Cozart Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 8:06 AM
Thank you, ML.
Richards Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 7:59 PM
And ps.....this reminds me a little of a poem I wrote last year when my brother lost his battle with cancer. (A Man and His Tree). I wish it had been as exquisite and filled with such graceful beauty yours is)
Cozart Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 8:03 PM
Thanks you so much, Carrie. I'm sorry for the loss of your brother.
Richards Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 7:50 PM
I love your poetry, Dale. And I identify with your way of life, and the nostalgia that is also my own about the people and the places I love! This is beautiful :)
Allison Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 5:07 PM
WOW!:-) I am in awe of your creativity Dale:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 5:13 PM
AW, thank you, Jan.
Lawless Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 4:37 PM
WHEW!!! This is magnificent in tone, texture, and imagery. Left me limp in my chair(with that little stinging of the eyes we men use to cover up emotion)
Cozart Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 4:46 PM
Thanks so much for reading, John.
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