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The morning's first cup is sweetest, rich and hot, as I look through my kitchen window at the hickory. The low branches will come off first. Once upon a time I'd climb it, perch atop the high branches, then in the throes of leafing, to gaze unfettered at the land. Should take the day to get them all, put them through the chipper. Dawn creeps upon October's harvested plain, sun igniting pumpkin flames in the lazy creek that bends at the tree, early mist caressing damp carob earth. The trunk will come later this week. Dew-stained fences meander idle tracts of shorn fields, air pungent with hay, apples and barley. Etched against apricot clouds spread in lemon sky strides the hickory, alive with orange light and bustling with wrens and robins, far off roosters crowing morning prayers. The stump will be out before the first snow. We'll be moved to town for winter by then, won't hear the wind crying over memories.

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Date: 4/25/2019 11:26:00 AM
Oh, those eyes! Wonderful.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 4/25/2019 11:29:00 AM
Thank you, Kurt.
Date: 9/11/2018 4:06:00 PM
wow, so beautiful. I am assuming this was a win with one of Brian's contests? Not sure, but big congrats on a very well deserved trophy win!! The ending makes one want to sigh.
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Date: 8/22/2018 3:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win. A most profound, interesting, beautifully written poem.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/22/2018 7:29:00 AM
Thanks, Susan.
Date: 8/20/2018 1:22:00 PM
This is sooo good Dale, I feel a profound sadness for the tree, never felt that before, a testament to your talent. Congrats on a deserved trophy win!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/20/2018 1:52:00 PM
Thank you very much, John.
Date: 8/19/2018 9:16:00 PM
Beautifully written and so nostalgically heartfelt, Dale. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy win! Sandra
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/20/2018 8:14:00 AM
Thanks very much, Sandra.
Date: 8/19/2018 4:10:00 PM
The way this beauty is composed tugged at my heartstrings as it grew richer and richer becoming profound in melancholic nostalgia causing tears to well up in my eyes Dale. You are a master poet and certainly deserve your outstanding trophy win! Congratulations my friend! A Fave!: )
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/19/2018 4:29:00 PM
AW, thanks so much, Connie.
Date: 8/19/2018 3:18:00 PM
Excellent! I really love this. Congratulations for your win :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/19/2018 4:29:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 8/19/2018 10:39:00 AM
Lovely imagery and melodic rhythm, Dale. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/19/2018 11:02:00 AM
Thank you very much, Line.
Date: 8/19/2018 3:12:00 AM
Wonderfully beautiful and melancholy write, Dale, on every level ... this has all the elements of the best of poetry, put together like an Anthony Bourdain Master Class, with a texture and taste for every palate ... exquisite, and going in my favs! (And italics, too! I'm teasing you, my friend!). All the best! :-)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/19/2018 7:38:00 AM
Thanks so much, Greg.
Date: 8/19/2018 2:13:00 AM
Wow <3
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/19/2018 7:39:00 AM
Thanks, Maureen.
Date: 8/19/2018 1:00:00 AM
What an amazing description, Dale. It drew me in from the first sip right up to the cockerel's crow!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/19/2018 7:39:00 AM
Than you, Wendy.
Date: 8/18/2018 9:45:00 PM
You paint both a picture and a feel with subtle yet impact-strong imagery. I am especially in love with the 2nd to last stanza - just divine. Congrats on the gold, take it to town and don't let the wind be told. All the best to you and your pen ... CayCay
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/19/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thank you, CayCay.
Date: 8/15/2018 8:58:00 AM
This is so beautiful Dale and the last line I felt the deepest. Just excellent!!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/15/2018 9:37:00 AM
Thanks very much, Mike.
Date: 8/14/2018 11:48:00 PM
Ooh, I feel that fall wind with this one; beautiful.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/15/2018 8:06:00 AM
Thank you, ML.
Date: 8/13/2018 7:59:00 PM
And ps.....this reminds me a little of a poem I wrote last year when my brother lost his battle with cancer. (A Man and His Tree). I wish it had been as exquisite and filled with such graceful beauty yours is)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/13/2018 8:03:00 PM
Thanks you so much, Carrie. I'm sorry for the loss of your brother.
Date: 8/13/2018 7:50:00 PM
I love your poetry, Dale. And I identify with your way of life, and the nostalgia that is also my own about the people and the places I love! This is beautiful :)
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Date: 8/13/2018 5:07:00 PM
WOW!:-) I am in awe of your creativity Dale:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/13/2018 5:13:00 PM
AW, thank you, Jan.
Date: 8/13/2018 4:37:00 PM
WHEW!!! This is magnificent in tone, texture, and imagery. Left me limp in my chair(with that little stinging of the eyes we men use to cover up emotion)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/13/2018 4:46:00 PM
Thanks so much for reading, John.

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