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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I wander about, surrounded by the hush of heaven. There is a red hibiscus blooming in the summertime garden. The sight of its touch enamors me: a morning kiss. It’s a new day. I feel great surrounded by trees’ whispers and drapes. They move in sibilant sound of the breeze, before the curtains open on the majestic performance: the rising sun. “A seed grows with no sound, but a tree falls with huge noise. Destruction has noise, but creation is quiet: This is the power of silence.” Today I embrace creation and the poise of silence: the Holy presence. I again wander into the eloquence of summertime reverence holding summer’s red flower: a red hibiscus

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Date: 5/11/2024 4:00:00 PM
So glorious, soft at its heart- your poetry is so welcome to my sensitivities, it rewards me with hope- hugs, just me! :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/11/2024 5:07:00 PM
thanks, 'just me' for your lovely comment...means a lot to me that my words gave you hope. Color me grateful, hugs, Sara
Date: 5/10/2024 3:50:00 PM
Applause my dear Sara. A masterpiece was written by one of the best. I must say that is unique. "this is the power of silence" I don't know, this is unbelievable. I make it my Fav. Have a great night writing poetry like this. Hugs/María
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/10/2024 4:15:00 PM
oh, thank you kind Maria for your enthusiastic comments. I'm grateful you liked my poem. I struggled a bit in writing it...so many thanks! I'm humbly grateful for your Fave...means a great deal to me. You're the best! have a great evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 5/10/2024 3:23:00 PM
Wow. An amazing tribute this is. I hope he doesn't mind older poems. I have a bunch on my favorite summer flower
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/10/2024 4:17:00 PM
Thanks for your encouraging comment, Andrea. I didn't note anything in his description about only submitting new poems...so you may be good to go. Thanks for stopping by, hugs, Sara
Date: 5/10/2024 8:54:00 AM
Sara... where are you? The power of silence... beautiful thought dear friend! Happy Jack xxx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/10/2024 4:18:00 PM
Hi Jack--I'm here...have had an erratic schedule over the past week. Not to worry; I wouldn't let a day go by without reading one of your poems. Thanks for dropping by today. Glad you liked my poem. Grateful for your visit....have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 5/10/2024 7:16:00 AM
I've heard that red is the birds' favorite color. A peaceful garden, as you describe, sends whispers of heavenly grace. Thank you for this gem.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/10/2024 4:19:00 PM
I think you're right about 'red,' Hilda. Glad you dropped by my garden and enjoyed my hibiscus with me. Have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

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