Hibernation

How long must I yield to dormancy?
These cells slow their churn
While my mind drifts in brutal fancy
Life's hope longs to burn
Traps dot my path, eager to lance me
Tissues beg to learn

Skin recoils from the sting of cruel storms
Resolve skips away
Until even dignity transforms
Slumber shapes my clay
Your face shall conquer all data swarms
Till my dying day

I'll guide you home as you fly along
My beacon rings true
Perhaps Aunt Spring will hasten your song
As she's prone to do
Future's thaw kindles, crafting you strong
In your vibrant hue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Golden Avatar
February 8, 2009 at 11:39 PM
I like it just as it is. Lovely, John. I'm ready for the thaw and the rejuvination, myself! Donna G.
Weber Avatar
February 2, 2009 at 1:07 PM
When pondering just what I wished to accomplish here I was torn, looking for some kind of hopeful message. Sorry if this didn't hit the mark for you; trying a new approach. Thanks for the critique!
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January 29, 2009 at 11:22 AM
"how long much I yield, dormant? ""traps litter my path eager to lance me"..work a wee bit more..really doesn't need the last verse. Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
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