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Walking back in time Remembering all the time You held my head so high Though time had brought its ties I longed you hold me tight Although my hands were tight I knew someday you'll come And break free all the ties No pain, no gain i thought But love from you not bought To bribe i tried but fault It is 'cause you're God I hid behind the smile A bleeding heart i nursed Tears that blurred my sight The promise was a mess How then would you come? By fire,water,or better still In form of angels Just to blot me out of sin Am changing day by day Imperfect still in making Hoping someday soon My story changes stones My history now a hi-story You've raised the standard high Not even the greatest man Can stand to challenge what's done Trusting you completely Walking in your footsteps Seat belt locked I wait, safely home i get

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Date: 10/16/2013 11:26:00 AM
I love the play of words in the title Price, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/16/2013 4:28:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Price! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/16/2013 4:05:00 AM
good morning Price, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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