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Hi Honey See You Tonight

A flirty young lady who went by the name Jane, 
Every day a new beau, was insanely addicted, couldn’t abstain
On dating sites, she would spend her day,
Hoping to meet Mr Right, come what may,
Instead, knifed seven times police said, she suffered inhumane pain.

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Jack Horne

Date: 6/5/2023 5:39:00 AM

just random-reading & hit this one again - still really gave me goosebumps - scary write

Jack Horne

Date: 1/28/2023 6:37:00 AM

oh, a scary one here, my friend!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/20/2023 1:56:00 PM

Never a good idea to use dating sites; especially in the time we're living in. Well warned.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/30/2022 1:11:00 PM

What a write. Warning, watch out for who you meet. Wolf in sheep's clothing. Write on with Blessings.....................

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 12/29/2022 8:53:00 PM

Oh God, that's pretty sad. I hope you are well dear Jennifer

Valsa George

Date: 12/25/2022 10:36:00 PM

I feel sad for such people. She may be suffering from OCD. Dating may be her obsession. If she had been normal she would have learnt by now. A great warning for all flirtatious women. Jenny, Have a Happy Christmas with your family !

Paul Callus

Date: 12/22/2022 12:12:00 PM

Sadly, this poem which started with a promise of smiles and laughs ended tragically. When will some people learn not to flirt with fate! ~ Warm regards & Hugs, my friend // paul ~#~#~ May I take this opportunity to wish you a Happy & Blessed Christmas and all the very best for 2023.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/17/2022 3:56:00 PM

It's not much of a place to meet a date; sadly, people do it anyway. Well crafted.

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/11/2022 8:26:00 AM

Reminds me of the 1977 movie 'Looking For Mr. Goodbar' ~ not all lessons are best learned by personal experience

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 12/10/2022 5:36:00 PM

A warning to be heeded Jennifer, glad you wrote it.

Judy Ball

Date: 12/10/2022 3:44:00 PM

Ooo Hoo Hoo! That's the danger of picking up strangers. I met a woman on another site who had brought a man she met at a gas station home with her. She invited him in and served iced tea. She left him in the livingroom while she went into the kitchen. He spiked her drink and though she was aware she couldn't move. He tortured her. She is still trying to this day to get past that horrible day. The Moral Here --- Don't Pick Up Strangers. JB

Lisa Ricci

Date: 12/10/2022 4:02:00 AM

Oh my gosh Jennifer. Good Morning. This is very vivid and sadly to say I bet this happens more than not to people. I for one never did this. Your entry is powerful. Thank you for sharing your talent. Have a wonderful morning and weekend. Blessings always to you and to those who feel the need for this type of relationship. Thank you.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/3/2022 10:10:00 AM

I feel better to meet someone thru friends or local. On line dating can be tragic in this day and age. love phyl

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 12/2/2022 6:48:00 PM

Very tragic Jennifer, dating sites aren’t always good to go to for reasons such as this. Better to meet someone naturally and take time getting to know one and other… Belle

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/2/2022 10:10:00 AM

Tragic! Sadly this is probably more common than many are aware. Men, you are not immune. Better chance meeting a potential mate at a local church or neighborhood club, but caution is always advised I tend to think.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/1/2022 8:09:00 PM

Where does this dark streak come from, my friend?! At any rate, I can only feel sorry for the poor victim. I think it's time for all of us to 'Just Say No' to 'social media' (whatever that is. lol). :) gw

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2022 3:37:00 PM

oh my goodness. Not what I expected. Sadly, this DOES happen. I see so many true crime shows and it's outrageous what people do.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/29/2022 5:59:00 AM

How sad. We had a murder last week. Quite rare really.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2022 3:55:00 AM

Whoa!! Ladies of the night do face that fact of life some will die at the hands of some brutal person out only to kill. Your work reminds us of the facts of life which sometimes are all too tragic. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/28/2022 7:57:00 PM

Oy! Unfortunately, your words resonate: A sign of the turbulent times in which we live. ~ gw

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/28/2022 6:14:00 PM

This is a fantastic limerick, Jennifer. In a world where stranger danger lurks in every corner of a dating scene and might pop up anywhere, it's reassuring to know that there's always room for safety. Hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/28/2022 3:03:00 PM

Hello Jennifer, I think it is wrong to try to find a soulmate from the internet. It could be a dangerous man looking for someone to kill for no reason at all. Hugs. Darlene.