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Hi-Poo Senryu

the loos crystal clean

but where the Cabinet meets

stench of corruption

                            
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moneysenryu

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Judy Ball

Date: 11/2/2023 7:19:00 PM

Ohhhhhh! Nooooo! Cute one Paul. Quick grab the spray cleaner and just squirt away! God Bless, JB

Paul Callus
Date: 11/3/2023 1:05:00 AM

Thank you for your pleasant reply, and the smile elicited, Judy :) Regards & blessings // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/31/2023 7:35:00 PM

this is VERY well done. Congrats

Paul Callus
Date: 11/1/2023 11:40:00 AM

Thank you for liking and for the congrats, Andrea. ~ Best regards // paul

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/30/2023 4:15:00 PM

Back with big congratulations on your win Paul! :)

Paul Callus
Date: 10/31/2023 7:25:00 AM

Thank you Linda for the visit and congrats :) Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 10/30/2023 10:40:00 AM

It's everywhere not just in Malta Paul!!love the place you took this one too, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 10/30/2023 3:36:00 PM

Thank you Jan. I've been wanting to get this one off my chest; there are crooks everywhere!! :( Hugs // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 10/29/2023 6:12:00 AM

ha ha ha, love this one, Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 10/30/2023 3:37:00 PM

Thank you, Jack; glad you enjoyed. Hope you're keeping well, my friend. // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/23/2023 11:51:00 AM

My pleasure Paul. Thanks for your visit as well.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/30/2023 3:34:00 PM

Always welcome to stop by, my friend // paul

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/21/2023 11:51:00 AM

I know what you mean, I think , about holding back and not posting, I, too, have done that, I betcha manny here have, Thi was a funny unique Senryu.)))))) Pangie

Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2023 9:19:00 AM

Thank you, my friend. Glad you enjoyed my humble little poem. Best regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/19/2023 8:00:00 AM

Ha ha ha, I like your sense of humour.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2023 9:13:00 AM

Enjoyed your reaction, Richard; thanks for dropping by. // paul

Brian Sambourne

Date: 10/18/2023 9:23:00 PM

Terrific, Paul. You've caught the stench of politics to a T. Even the title rhymes. Top notch. Be well. Brian

Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2023 9:05:00 AM

Thank you, Brian. Best regards // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/9/2023 9:21:00 AM

Whoa! Dear Paul, your keen intellect and expressive pen are not only golden but they are rapier sharp as well! An incisive piece that pierces through bureaucratic BS to cut to the bone. Love it! Great use of the title and poetic form. A potent little package of poetry, my inspiring friend. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 10/10/2023 1:51:00 PM

Thank you dear Susan; your feedback is absolutely gorgeous. Yes...sometimes there is a need to use a sharp yet harmless rapier:) A Senryu offers that opportunity. Goodnight ~ warm regards & hugs, my friend // paul