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Hey Ya-dodo

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Poetic Form: Dodoitsu
Inspired: 2024 February 28

 

*3rd Place*
Vo dee oh doe
Contest Judged: 2024 May 28
Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues

 

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hey ya! (uh-oh) no ring! (oooh) don't wanna meet your daddy don't wanna meet your mama a short pass, no hail Mary, <--[long forward football pass] you think you got it

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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2024 2:06:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your win in the contest, William :) - hugs
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/30/2024 4:25:00 AM
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I am grateful, Anne-Lise, Blessings, Aloha, William
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/29/2024 5:54:00 AM
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Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/29/2024 7:13:00 AM
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Dodo..., a difficult form that I endured with my love of sports, thanks, Sara, Aloha, William.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2024 9:32:00 PM
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Congrats, William! No ring! No visit to the parents…seems like trouble in paradise…well not exactly paradise, eh…
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/28/2024 10:48:00 PM
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Kim, I'd fun from the get-go, thanks and Mahalo, William

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