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Hey, Mr Dylan

Hey, Mr Tambourine Man, play a song for me— in the jingle-jangle morning, I’ll follow you. Like my nan, slippers tapping, buttered toast, kitchen radio. She’d sway while evening’s empire turned to sand, vanishing from her hand, eyes wide, still not sleeping. Grandad called him “the boy with a tambourine soul,” said he took the badge off, laid his guns down— “Can’t shoot them anymore.” He laughed with the tramp, dealt with shadows, followed smoke rings through time. Mom caught him on cassette—side A, side B, in eyeliner, safety pins and anarchy. She’d quote, “You ain’t got nothing to lose,” above her Docs. She rode a chrome horse skipping school, blasting, “How does it feel?!” through a Walkman with stickers. Then came me—1995: Tamagotchis, dial-up tones, burnt CDs, LimeWire ghosts. Dylan low in lo-fi, hidden between Nirvana and Spice Girls. I played. He said: “Take me on a trip upon your magic swirling ship— my senses stripped, my hands can’t grip.” And I was gone— boot heels wandering, fading into my parade. No home, like a rolling stone. I followed through frightened trees, past frozen leaves to the beach, far from twisted sorrow— one hand waved free. I danced. Circled by circus sands, I let memory and fate sink beneath. Let me forget today— until tomorrow. I sang Knock-knock-knockin’ on heaven’s door to a mate too young. Dark cloud falling, eyes wide like Dylan’s lost passport. He knew no words but felt rhythm— slow and steady like grief that rhymes. I scrolled through changing times, TikToks, Brexit, Twitter storms, but there he was— “Come writers and critics who prophesise with your pen,” he warned, in a forgotten playlist. I turned it up. “Don’t stand in the doorway, don’t block the hall— for the times they are a-changin’!” And they were. And are. And always will be. From Pokémon cards to climate dread, we better start swimmin’, or sink like stones. Sometimes I feel knock-knock-knockin’ on heaven’s comments— asking how does it feel? as I scroll a tab left open too long. Invisible, no secrets left, Dylan nods above, rhyme on his heels. I wasn’t born to this— but I inherited it. Like freckles, stubbornness, or how we pause at harmonica’s cry. It’s in the way my nan swayed washing dishes, mom smoked by the window, and I sit here now, searching for meaning in the jingle, jangle, morning, man. So hey, Mr Tambourine Man— still not sleepy, no place going. But I’ll follow you, through rhyme, and time, and all the rolling songs never finished.

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Date: 5/26/2025 9:18:00 PM
Great take! I've been a huge Bob Dylan fan since I was fourteen years old (Blonde on Blond, Blood on the Tracks are favorites, but I love all his new stuff), but Mr. Tambourine was the first song that (as we once said, "blew my mind"). I was born in '58 'm 66 now. The generational aspect of this is fascinating. My son was born in '92 (Pokémon).
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/29/2025 6:37:00 AM
Thank you so much. I really enjoyed reading your reflection—there’s something so special about how music, especially Dylan’s, weaves through generations and becomes a personal timeline of sorts. Mr. Tambourine Man is such an iconic piece—no wonder it left a lasting impression. I love hearing how these experiences connect across time; thank you for sharing a bit of your journey with me.
Date: 5/22/2025 7:54:00 PM
I too am a Dylan fan, despite being the 180-degree opposite of him. Greatness eclipses all controversy and complaints... And he sure has done well for a guy who can't carry a tune, eh?
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/24/2025 8:40:00 AM
Absolutely, that’s a great way to put it. Dylan’s talent and impact truly transcend everything else. It’s fascinating how his unique style has become iconic despite—or perhaps because of—his unconventional approach. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Date: 5/22/2025 12:37:00 PM
He has too many fans... I always am one more and more... and more now... I'm gonna save this and savor it for a long long read... at someone else's Garden Party, I suppose. (Thanks for hosting.)
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/24/2025 8:38:00 AM
Thank you so much—what a lovely thing to say. I'm honoured to be among the many, and it truly means a lot that you'd want to revisit the piece. Enjoy that long read whenever it comes, Garden Party or not—and thank you for being part of it.
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Gray Squirrel
Date: 5/22/2025 1:19:00 PM
Poor Mr.Zimmerman... we LOVE these songs... what a beautiful accident.
Date: 5/21/2025 1:56:00 PM
It seems like you're saying writing is there no matter the age, and there's always memory.... even though things will change. it follows from one scene to the next very well. I looked up that song- it's steadiness in the madness. I liked "don't worry about today until tomorrow" -
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/24/2025 8:37:00 AM
Thank you so much for this thoughtful reflection. You’ve captured the heart of what I was trying to express—how writing and memory remain constant, even as everything else shifts. I’m really glad the transitions resonated with you, and that you looked up the song too—it’s such a grounding piece. I appreciate you taking the time to engage so deeply with the poem.

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