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July.7.2023

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Hey Giraffe, I wonder how tall you are! In height no other animal, on par You're the tallest of all seen so far Though not popular, to me you're a star Some think you are lean and lanky But I love you as you're never cranky None can accuse you of being whacky Shall I call you by the name Jackie? You can reach up to any tall tree Everywhere you can roam free On flatlands you're rarely seen grazing With your long neck you're amazing! Love to watch you with your head up in sky, Chewing green leaves stationed high. Flanked with a coat of tawny spots, Skilfully God has assembled your parts.

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/24/2023 8:17:00 PM

Congratulations on this cute poem, Valsa.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/24/2023 4:57:00 AM

Back to congratulate you, Dear Valsa. Giraffes are such cute creatures! Enjoyed your delightful poem.

Len Gasun

Date: 7/24/2023 4:17:00 AM

Wow! I love this a lot and immensely enjoyed from start to end. Skillyfully God has assembled your parts- what a wonderful ending. Congratulations on your win and this superb rhyme! Thanks for sharing. Blessings always. Hugs

Stephan McBride

Date: 7/9/2023 3:01:00 PM

: ). This is amazing, love it, what a fun joyful poem : )

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/9/2023 6:03:00 AM

Enjoyed your cute poem, Dear Valsa...whimsical and light-hearted! Btw, sent you a soup-mail. Love ~ Mala

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/8/2023 9:42:00 PM

Nice to read this whimsical ditty of serendipity from your pen, Valsa. ~ Light-hearted, but not light-headed! :) gw

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/8/2023 10:00:00 AM

:)) Love it. "Skillfully God has assembled Jackie's parts...and your eyes and skill to see and relate such treasures to us in your own, loving way. Thank you. I needed this. Lighthearted and uplifting.

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/8/2023 6:48:00 AM

Valsa, such a pleasure this morning to read all about Jackie! I love Giraffes as well! Happy Saturday !!

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/8/2023 6:36:00 AM

Valsa, your creation is adorned with exquisite imagery and eloquent descriptions, harmoniously complemented by an enchanting illustration. Good luck with the contest

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/7/2023 10:36:00 PM

Delicate and well-written poem, dear Valsa. Best for a win.

Bill Baker

Date: 7/7/2023 3:58:00 PM

Wonderful illustration at the top to match your imagery and descriptions of this Godly creation, Valsa. Good luck in the contest, and have a blessed day my dear friend. Bill

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/7/2023 12:45:00 PM

I've always loved giraffes, probably because I'm so short and I've always wanted to be tall - very fun and clever :)

Paige Hind

Date: 7/7/2023 12:27:00 PM

Cute. Nice tribute to giraffes! Warming to the heart!

Jay Narain

Date: 7/7/2023 11:41:00 AM

Nice tribute to Giraffe. I like them too, Nice poem,