Notes About The Poem
*not a true story* Date written: 07/25/2023

Hey, Aggressive Driver

  Swerving in and out of lanes without 
          A care in the world. Great, now you cut 
             Into mine! Did you bother signaling?
          Of course, you didn't. The impatience!
           The rudeness! Flipping birds? Really?

          Feuding with time could prove costly,
         So ease off the gas pedal; stop baiting 
          State troopers. Reduce speed; you're 
        Heading home from work, or an errand, 
         I suppose, because the sun is setting.

       Are you recreating "Fast Five" scenes, or
     Living dangerously at motorists' expense?
        Well, the highway is no NASCAR track!
         I'm rather surprised you don't rack up 
                 Speeding tickets, or do ya?

       How about this; head to your destination 
   Half an hour early. Yeah, try that for a change!
    Stay in your lane, slow down; you're begging
        For an accident, the fatal kind. And quit
    The road-raging! Should you even be driving?
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Manassian Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 12:52 AM
So frustrating when this happens. I totally understand your need to write and vent. Sooner or later these kinds of drivers get into serious trouble.
Ibeh Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 4:19 AM
Yep, they're definitely flirting with disaster. Thanks for dropping by, Eileen:-)
Volumes Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 11:45 PM
The pace builds as the irritation grows. The reader can actually hear the tone of your voice change as the situation becomes more dangerous. A brilliant write. Enjoyed.
Ibeh Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 4:21 AM
Thank you very much for the visit and wonderful feedback, SV:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 8:19 PM
Love your dramatic verse! Leave early…good advice!
Ibeh Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 8:24 PM
Thank you very much for the visit and comment, Kim:-)
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