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Hey, Seth, Where's Your Chariot

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Thanks to Paul Callus for a comment he wrote about an '11th Commandment.'

Moses, disappointed, asked, "Only Ten?" When will You give us more commandments? When? 'Let Me first see you obey The first Ten, if that's OK' In Seth's chariot, Moses drove away...

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Date: 8/21/2020 1:05:00 PM
I'm still looking for the "redacted" version
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