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Hexsonnetta and the End

Fall arrives damp and cool Clouds with rain cleanse the air A new crispness~gold pears Soon expect winter's rule A rest sometimes cruel Cold, ice, snow main affair Deep within winter's heart Lies firelit warm nights And hot cocoa a delight From the hearth we can't depart One more hug before we start Linger beside the fire bright Love seasons come and go Fall has come and winter flows Contest: Any Poem That Received HM Sponsor: Broken Wings Author: Sara Kendrick Written: August 24, 2015 I know I can't do meter but at least I tried..LOL,LOL,LOL This is about something besides fall and winter..Can you guess what???

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Date: 9/21/2015 2:22:00 AM
Wonderful write Sara n yet another superb win! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/20/2015 11:20:00 AM
Hi Sara: Congratulations on your win. I think it had a good flow.
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Date: 9/19/2015 9:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win Sara
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Date: 9/19/2015 7:39:00 PM
Congratulations, Sara, on your winning write.
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Date: 9/19/2015 5:11:00 PM
Sara, some of your lines had too many syllables; however, I wanted you to know this one was very pretty. I loved the part about the gold pears and I believe it is a spiritual message, right?
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Date: 9/19/2015 4:30:00 PM
Sara, congrats on your HM win. SKAT
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Date: 8/24/2015 3:17:00 PM
A beautiful and excellence write..........A.M.
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