Hexed

Dear Plumbing I am extremely vexed. I never know where you will burst next. I took a nice bath, And incurred your wrath. Why you won't turn off has me perplexed. Came in no.7

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/16/2011 11:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Techno-Limerick contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 11/15/2011 8:52:00 AM

glad to see this on the winner's list! congrats on your win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/11/2011 1:04:00 AM

JOYCE~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, WITH YOUR entry FOR CAROLYN, TECHNO LIMERICK* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2011 8:03:00 PM

NIcely done, Joyce. Congratulations. I had not even seen this one before!

John Freeman

Date: 11/10/2011 5:16:00 PM

Nice limerick Joyce, Congratulations on your nice place. Agape, Moses

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 11/10/2011 10:19:00 AM

Joyce-This is really a nice Limerick. Reminds me of the plumbing in my 1920 Craftsman-just replaced all the galvanized :) Hope yours starts acting better soon :) Congrats. on your win :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2011 10:05:00 AM

Congrats Joyce on a great win for this witty Limerick luv..

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/10/2011 8:38:00 AM

I have shared this delimma!! Plumbing has a mind of its own, either too cold, too hot, ....the beauty of living in an old house!!! Congratulations Joyce!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/10/2011 8:23:00 AM

We take plumbing for granted, Joyce, and when something goes wrong with it, it can be very irritating. Enjoyed the humor in your perfectly composed limerick. The competition was stiff, so all who placed had to be in the top tier of both Alexa's and my rankings. Love, Carolyn

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 11/3/2011 9:31:00 AM

ha! I love this! cute beginning w/"dear plumbing..." - so funny :P

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/29/2011 9:03:00 AM

funny.... is it snowing in your town? it is 50 degrees here today.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/28/2011 8:50:00 PM

Drip....drip....drip....I can hear the water company's bank account going Ka-ching, Joyce....What a fun limerick...so much truth. Always gotta have a great HVAC guy and a plummer guy in your back pocket!! wink wink. Gwendolen