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June-5- 2025

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HERMIT

Inner light
is all that I seek,
plumbing in
to my depths.
barricade myself from world~
peace fills my being.

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2025

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Andrea Dietrich

June 7, 2025 at 4:24 PM

Very meaningful one congrats on the win

June 7, 2025 at 6:01 AM

plumbing into my depths…great exploration of a hermit. We will never understand what we ourselves have not undertaken. We do see how Elijah seemed alone (except for God) at times. He had great emotions. God bless you, dear Valsa! Congrats!

Paula Goldsmith

June 6, 2025 at 12:07 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "HERMIT" write. Have a blessed day with your win.......

Krishnanand Guptar

June 6, 2025 at 11:07 AM

Congratulations dear friend on you win in this contest with a bright write on a hermit. Wishing you a pleasant weekend.

Bernardo F. Asuncion

June 5, 2025 at 9:36 PM

This is a concise yet powerful poem!

John Loving Iii

June 5, 2025 at 1:30 PM

From Harlot to hermit? Mmmm what shall I use.

Joseph P. DiMino

June 5, 2025 at 5:38 AM

Sometimes, for some, traveling in is the only way out. Love it, Valsa! Best of luck in contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 5, 2025 at 2:32 AM

- Peace in your soul...lovely written, Valsa :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

June 5, 2025 at 1:27 AM

Never used this type of poetry. Hope you had fun at the zoo. The art of silence is so important. Blessings

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