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Here She Comes

Out into the world you go fast away suit to tie ready for the grinding steel I wait for a smile, at the end of day You fly with your car like a swift blue jay instant coffee blend and eyes to the wheel out into the world you go, fast away Its a swift climb and you think work is play everything is planned to an even keel out into the world you go fast away The text arrives, "Baby is on the way!" he picks up his keys and lets out a squeal She waits for his smile, at the end of the day A child full of love, a cooing Monet a dimpled quick smile melts his heart of steel out into the world he goes fast away she, waits for a smile at the end of day. January 10, 2019 Villanelle Form

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Date: 1/13/2019 3:56:00 PM
Great job on the form, this is such a sweet story!
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Date: 1/10/2019 8:20:00 PM
Pixie, great imagery and the repeated perfect .Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/10/2019 1:41:00 PM
charming me with this heartfelt read,pixie...good one!...huggs
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Date: 1/10/2019 8:45:00 AM
Lovely poem :)
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Date: 1/10/2019 7:31:00 AM
I like the tone and rhythm of this poem..and the cooing Monet..well written, Pixie.
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Date: 1/10/2019 7:25:00 AM
Very nice poem. I enjoyed this :)
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