Premiere Contest WinnerHere Lies a Poet

Her ink has dried, her stories spun
On distant shores, her songs are sung


Atlantis must be beautiful in fall Carolyn,
Love always, jim

September, 2021
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Gasun Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 7:30 AM
Very touching and exquisite write my dear friend James! She's dearly missed. She was a very nice person and one of the great poets of PS. Big Congrats on your well-deserved trophy win! I love this a lot. Thanks for sharing. Blessings. Hugs
Goff Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 10:02 AM
Agreed Len... Blessings Back! thank you
Delaney Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 4:10 PM
Touching beyond words. A tribute of note. Best, SuZ
Goff Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 5:11 PM
Thanks SuZ!
George   Avatar
March 2, 2022 at 8:25 PM
BRILLANT! SIMPLY BRILLANT! Congratulations on your well deserved wind, dear James.
Goff Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 2:04 PM
Thanks Elaine...
Baker Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 2:51 PM
Said a lot in 4 lines, James. Write On! Bill
Goff Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 5:55 AM
Thanks Bill!
Staton Avatar
February 6, 2022 at 5:28 AM
Very touching! Take care and God bless!
Goff Avatar
February 7, 2022 at 3:29 AM
Thanks Valerie...
Thompson Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 4:17 PM
A lovely poem by a great writer. Take care, my friend. Jess:)
Goff Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 11:08 PM
Thanks Jessica...
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January 9, 2022 at 10:00 AM
A wonderful tribute to our dear Carolyn. She was a wonderful person. love phyl
Goff Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 2:36 AM
True Phyl, thanks, Jim
Sangster - K Avatar
December 25, 2021 at 6:17 PM
This is excellent as you captured so much in just two lines. I didn't know Carolyn but If she is aware of your tribute in the spirit realm she would have to be smiling. A truly beautiful tribute James and a well deserved win! Cheers Anne :-)
Goff Avatar
December 25, 2021 at 8:36 PM
Thank you Anne! Carolyn was special...
Calasibetta Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 2:01 PM
Wow, I see why this was a 1st place winner. I didn't know Carolyn but I know she was a highly respected "Souper". I have read her work and your work is a beautiful tribute to such an accomplished lady. Blessings, Paulette
Goff Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 2:35 PM
Thank you Paulette, you are a very talented poet...
La France Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 9:20 AM
James, this is so beautiful, I think of Carolyn so much, she was an amazing person and poet (btw, my very long poem, Doublethink Beliefs is completed now if you wish to come back) ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Goff Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 2:34 PM
Thanks Constance, I need to re-read Carolyn's book about Atlantis, it's amazing! I told her she needed a sequel, but she never got around to it, your 'Doublethink Beliefs' is a Poetry soup Classic All Time! Wow!!!
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December 5, 2021 at 9:58 AM
An incredibly fine tribute to Carolyn. Congratulations on a well deserved win! Brian
Goff Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 7:01 PM
Thank you Brian...
Neels Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 7:39 AM
Such a beautiful tribute to an amazing person! Congratulations to you James :)
Goff Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 7:26 PM
Thanks Wilma, in those days, soupers always signed-off...love!
Jordan Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 9:16 AM
James so much said in so few words, excellent my friend, Michael
Goff Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 10:23 AM
Thank you Michael!
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November 18, 2021 at 7:14 AM
I just loved your poem. Her ink has dried her stories spun, on distant shores, her sounds are sung. Wow
Goff Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 12:37 PM
Thanks Paghunda!
Stein Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 9:12 AM
Such a great poem.
Goff Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 9:14 AM
Thank you Sarah...
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November 15, 2021 at 12:09 PM
Gorgeous penning!
Goff Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Thanks Kim...
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November 14, 2021 at 8:51 AM
Lovely poem, James ~
Goff Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 11:27 AM
Thank you Line...
Kalita Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 2:18 PM
Belated congratulations for the deserving win! Splendid.. Silpika
Goff Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 3:28 PM
Thank you Silpika...
Kiser Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 1:28 PM
Quite a good couplet.
Goff Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 6:33 PM
Thank you ML!
Brown Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 3:29 PM
Hi! James, Congratulations! on a well written poem. ~ Debbie
Goff Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 8:53 PM
Thank you Debra!
Lawrence Avatar
November 3, 2021 at 3:03 PM
Belated congratulations on this loving tribute...she lives on in her words forever. Best to you, Susan :)
Goff Avatar
November 3, 2021 at 6:51 PM
Thanks Susan...
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November 2, 2021 at 12:44 PM
A true summation here James melancholy is Within its lines along with the memory of Carolyns talent, its got me missing her again' Well put though, well scribed'
Goff Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 1:42 PM
Thanks Joe...
Ball Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 5:02 PM
Beautiful and fitting James. She was and is a lovely soul and fine poetess. She is greatly missed. God Bless, JB
Goff Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 1:42 PM
Thank you Judy...
Calasibetta Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 5:45 PM
Great write....a well deserved win! Take Care, Paulette
Goff Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 6:37 PM
Thank you Paulette...
Neels Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 3:22 AM
Beautiful tribute to a beautiful soul, James :)
Goff Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 11:16 AM
Thank you Wilma...
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