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6/1/2025 for The Beatles - Lay It To Me Poetry Contest sponsored by Charles Messina

Here Comes the Sun

You're lost in thoughts of Yesterday. 
I'd like to drive Yer Blues away. 
Always, Across the Universe,
Let it Be, do not cry or curse. 
"Life is a Long and Winding Road",
I say, Because when love has showed 
the Rain will go away, dear one.
You will then say, "Here Comes the Sun".

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Emilia James Date: 8/17/2025 3:42:00 AM Congratulations on your win David. Emilia : ) Login to Reply David Crandall Date: 8/17/2025 10:31:00 AM Thanks Emilia! :-)

Charles Messina Date: 8/16/2025 8:27:00 AM David, I love the way you incorporated some of my favorite Beatle's songs into your poem. Congratulations on your top win on my contest! Charlie Login to Reply David Crandall Date: 8/16/2025 11:38:00 AM Thanks, Charles - it was a fun contest to participate in!

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/3/2025 3:01:00 PM Hello David Crandall, i like this poem very much. it wil be my fav. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/ Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/9/2025 11:28:00 AM Hello David,noh, it made you think of songs you like. that is great . i like a lot of songs to. enjoy your daay my friend. /Darlene/ David Crandall Date: 6/3/2025 5:00:00 PM Thanks, Darlene, I'm happy to hear you liked it. I enjoyed writing it, because it made me think of songs I like.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/2/2025 12:59:00 PM - A fun poem with Beatles titles... I've done several like this... luck in the contest, David :) - hugs Login to Reply David Crandall Date: 6/2/2025 5:21:00 PM Thanks - hmm, I'll have to check some of 'em out!

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/2/2025 5:23:00 AM How fun! Login to Reply David Crandall Date: 6/2/2025 5:20:00 PM Thanks - it was fun, and as I look at it, I'm happy to say that of the eight songs I picked, all but one are among my favorite Beatles songs - the other one I only like OK, but it seemed to fit.

Tom Woody Date: 6/1/2025 1:47:00 PM Awesome. I did similar with twenty titles in my piece - Life is a song. Ha! Captcha is eww. I disagree Login to Reply David Crandall Date: 6/1/2025 6:21:00 PM Thanks, and wow, I'll check it out. I think my brain might break if I tried to get 20 lines.