Here Comes the Sun

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6/1/2025 for The Beatles - Lay It To Me Poetry Contest sponsored by Charles Messina

You're lost in thoughts of Yesterday. I'd like to drive Yer Blues away. Always, Across the Universe, Let it Be, do not cry or curse. "Life is a Long and Winding Road", I say, Because when love has showed the Rain will go away, dear one. You will then say, "Here Comes the Sun".

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/3/2025 3:01:00 PM

Hello David Crandall, i like this poem very much. it wil be my fav. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/9/2025 11:28:00 AM

Hello David,noh, it made you think of songs you like. that is great . i like a lot of songs to. enjoy your daay my friend. /Darlene/

David Crandall
Date: 6/3/2025 5:00:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene, I'm happy to hear you liked it. I enjoyed writing it, because it made me think of songs I like.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/2/2025 12:59:00 PM

- A fun poem with Beatles titles... I've done several like this... luck in the contest, David :) - hugs

David Crandall
Date: 6/2/2025 5:21:00 PM

Thanks - hmm, I'll have to check some of 'em out!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/2/2025 5:23:00 AM

How fun!

David Crandall
Date: 6/2/2025 5:20:00 PM

Thanks - it was fun, and as I look at it, I'm happy to say that of the eight songs I picked, all but one are among my favorite Beatles songs - the other one I only like OK, but it seemed to fit.

Tom Woody

Date: 6/1/2025 1:47:00 PM

Awesome. I did similar with twenty titles in my piece - Life is a song. Ha! Captcha is eww. I disagree

David Crandall
Date: 6/1/2025 6:21:00 PM

Thanks, and wow, I'll check it out. I think my brain might break if I tried to get 20 lines.