Her Warm Breath

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As Her warm breath blows gently upon my skin. Spring summons a grin. Every friendly breeze is designed to please. Each, soft as a kiss, a moment of bliss. As my spirits rise Spring springs Her surprise. And from deep within I feel hope begin, as Her warm breath blows gently upon my skin. (Rhyme) 5/18/2021

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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/18/2021 11:55:00 AM

Wow in awesome new rhyme scheme you have rendered a very sensational romantic poem courting Spring in clever word play and fabulous poetic wordings. Kudos!!! -------------->>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<< Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/18/2021 3:24:00 PM

Thanks S., I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/18/2021 9:27:00 AM

An interesting form I had never heard about, Emile. Wonderful personification of spring. Nice rhymes. I shall have to give it a try....

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/18/2021 10:50:00 AM

Thanks Milt, as always your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.