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Her Vision

From deep down the twilight of memories
Her slender figure emerged so tall
Whispering the vows once we had made
The words of which I couldn't recall

My frozen heart was at once erupted
Into flames of passion incomparably strong 
Producing lava of fiery feelings and emotions 
That never thought that to me they belong 

I opened my arms with untold anticipation 
For her to come to fulfill our unrealized dream 
But my vision of her was unexpectedly vanished
Failing my agonizing soul from pain to redeem 

  

© Demetrios Trifiatis
   20 August 2014

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Tiaua M Ioane Date: 8/20/2014 10:00:00 PM Dearest friend, so so lovely to see your dear wise smile on PS again. This is a beautiful painfully tender piece, a real gem. Welcome back dear Demetrios! Lots of Alofas, Tiaua. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/21/2014 5:18:00 AM Lots of Alofas to you dearest princess of the waves! It is so nice to be back and receive such warm welcome! Thank you so much!

Leon Enriquez Date: 8/20/2014 8:04:00 PM Dear Demetrios: Please see my new poem called "Welcome Back" which is for you. Enjoy! Leon Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/21/2014 5:19:00 AM I have seen it and enjoyed your friendship this rare commodity in our days. God bless you Leon , my friend, for your gracious gesture!

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 8/20/2014 7:34:00 PM A beautiful poem written from the heart. Loved the last stanza. Have a blessed day ... Lucilla Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/21/2014 5:20:00 AM Lucy, my dear, always a pleasure to see you! Thank you for your kindness and nobility!

Eileen Manassian Date: 8/20/2014 3:57:00 PM Agony is part of life...it helps us realize what we have lost. Lovely write, dear wise one. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/20/2014 5:16:00 PM Yes, it is mikroula mou! Thank you for taking the time to visit and to comment. Very much appreciated!

Leon Enriquez Date: 8/20/2014 1:04:00 PM Dear Demetrios: I had a hunch to take a peek at the New Poems before sleeping. It's 2am here in Singapore and I'm glad I did. Your poem and you're back. Wonder-full! We missed you, our Greek friend. Talk to you soon. Leon Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/20/2014 5:15:00 PM Leo, my friend, how nice to hear from you after so long time! Seven times have I passed through your lovely country and still I am longing for more! Thank you for your visit and comment.