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Her Vision

From deep down the twilight of memories Her slender figure emerged so tall Whispering the vows once we had made The words of which I couldn't recall My frozen heart was at once erupted Into flames of passion incomparably strong Producing lava of fiery feelings and emotions That never thought that to me they belong I opened my arms with untold anticipation For her to come to fulfill our unrealized dream But my vision of her was unexpectedly vanished Failing my agonizing soul from pain to redeem © Demetrios Trifiatis 20 August 2014

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Tiaua M Ioane

Date: 8/20/2014 10:00:00 PM

Dearest friend, so so lovely to see your dear wise smile on PS again. This is a beautiful painfully tender piece, a real gem. Welcome back dear Demetrios! Lots of Alofas, Tiaua.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/21/2014 5:18:00 AM

Lots of Alofas to you dearest princess of the waves! It is so nice to be back and receive such warm welcome! Thank you so much!

Leon Enriquez

Date: 8/20/2014 8:04:00 PM

Dear Demetrios: Please see my new poem called "Welcome Back" which is for you. Enjoy! Leon

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/21/2014 5:19:00 AM

I have seen it and enjoyed your friendship this rare commodity in our days. God bless you Leon , my friend, for your gracious gesture!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/20/2014 7:34:00 PM

A beautiful poem written from the heart. Loved the last stanza. Have a blessed day ... Lucilla

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/21/2014 5:20:00 AM

Lucy, my dear, always a pleasure to see you! Thank you for your kindness and nobility!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/20/2014 3:57:00 PM

Agony is part of life...it helps us realize what we have lost. Lovely write, dear wise one.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/20/2014 5:16:00 PM

Yes, it is mikroula mou! Thank you for taking the time to visit and to comment. Very much appreciated!

Leon Enriquez

Date: 8/20/2014 1:04:00 PM

Dear Demetrios: I had a hunch to take a peek at the New Poems before sleeping. It's 2am here in Singapore and I'm glad I did. Your poem and you're back. Wonder-full! We missed you, our Greek friend. Talk to you soon. Leon

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/20/2014 5:15:00 PM

Leo, my friend, how nice to hear from you after so long time! Seven times have I passed through your lovely country and still I am longing for more! Thank you for your visit and comment.