Her Tormentor’s Plot

catalyse of chalk
 circles sooted box, reveals
  the vortex inside
   stakes open her eyes
     pries into her private life

      draws blood with madness
       insists a deep cut of ties
        a vampire’s bite sucks
          glistens under moon-lightning
          with darkening of iris

            the rectangle shut
             and discomforting inside
              the satin lining
               that swaddles her until when
                feeds the lack of blood pressure

                 buried in the earth
                  instead of mausoleum
                   means she is fated
                   until flood rains dredge her up
                 bitterly famished and ripe

                her tormentor’s plot
              enjoying her plight of pangs
             and her screaming fangs
            that engulf her first victim
           she begs a silver bullet

         …and who will shoot first
        the gun, with no reflection,
       or the too-white teeth?
      does lover want to join her
     or distribute her ashes?

    the two quick rounds nail
   tormentor, his protogé
  bloodthirst vanishes
 end of bad day, sky’s crimson
and the hungry are looming.

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Date: 9/18/2024 3:35:00 PM
Ugh, tragic..."The vortex inside" very deep...some powerful imagery and diction,
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2024 10:28:00 AM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 9/13/2024 8:10:00 AM
Wow you take me away with such powerful phrases to a scary place! What a vivid wonderful imagination you have Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2024 1:24:00 PM
Thank you, Karen! :)
Date: 9/13/2024 1:35:00 AM
Now, let's see what we can concoct while they sleep! Two pointed wooden stakes? Two garlands of garlic? Mirrors won't help much. Maybe a dash of holy water, but I'm not much of an expert at fighting vampires :) Still hugs for you, my friend. Great poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2024 7:49:00 AM
Oh but you sound like quite the vampire hunter…lol. ;) Hugs, Victor!
Date: 9/12/2024 9:41:00 PM
'rectangle shut/ satin lining/gun with no reflection/hungry are looming...' powerful write frame to frame engaging read dear poet. creative. +FAV.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2024 7:50:00 AM
Thank you, Thriveni!
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