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Her Tin Crown

Smile gone, the yellow orb wrapped in haze leaves sidewalks and lawns lonelier Darkness o'erspreads afternoon's tin crown Her realm overmatched she collapses into the grim face of night -- stars, squinting cold points in the sky the moon's paint scraped off the horizon a Wind that raises goosebumps ~ riding the sere mane of a witch

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Date: 9/21/2021 2:14:00 PM
Oh, the witch. Great ending!!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/23/2021 6:20:00 PM
Oh, the witch! Oh, the sand! lol. Thanks, Robert
Date: 9/13/2021 9:12:00 AM
A creative and colorful write. Hope all is OK with you. Have a blessed day as you write away....................
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/13/2021 10:12:00 AM
Thanks, Paula. Good enough here... Hope it's good by you too! ~ Tin Pan Alley Tipsy
Date: 9/13/2021 8:00:00 AM
A captivating poem. I read the sun the tin crown, my read anyway. xomo
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/13/2021 10:08:00 AM
I write 'em; you read 'em; We eat 'em!... Or perhaps You knead 'em; We bake 'em; The world eats 'em... :) gw

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