Her Thread

Sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust
A willing victim to time’s soft crust
Dulled sergeant stripes lay on the floor
Fading remnants from a worldly war

This old, now lifeless, bricked in room
Is now but a capsule, her timeless tomb
Her future and dreams enjoined in fight
It's here she threaded her rifle each night 

The war years seemed like only yesterday
Still, both them and her have gone away
Yet here in this room Mom's candle does glow
It's here in this room she labored so

Her faint initials still etched in the rust 
Beside her machine she is frozen in dust
That wonderful lady and her vanishing mark
The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 10:37 PM
Nice, Jerry! Congrats!
Hackett Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Kim, and Thank you sew much.
Sergi Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 7:21 AM
Well written, JERRY. Congratulations!
Hackett Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Thank you sew much
George   Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 6:06 PM
Great rendering here Jerry. Many congrats on your fine win. Sincerely, Elaine
Hackett Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Elaine, Thank you sew much.
Johnson Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 2:56 PM
Congratulations. Novel and well done. Joyce
Hackett Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 3:54 PM
Joyce, your words are appreciated, thank you sew much.
Allison Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 11:51 AM
beautifully written Jerry, Many congratulations on your win in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Hackett Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 1:49 PM
Jan, thank you sew much.
Gentry Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 10:11 AM
I so enjoyed this. Congratulations on your win with this well-written look back. Well done!
Hackett Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 11:31 AM
Susan, Thank you sew much
Gondolf Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 8:17 AM
Jerry, back to say congrats on this well deserved win. John
Hackett Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 8:41 AM
And to you I say Than you sew much.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Jerry, I love this! A fave! Especially 2nd stanza! Congrats!
Hackett Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Kim, Thank you sew much.
Gauthier Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 6:02 AM
Well done, Jerry. Congrats on your win.
Hackett Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Line, Thank you sew much.
Gondolf Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 7:01 AM
Jerry, I really enjoyed this poem, very nicely written around the specified lines. Best of luck in the contest. John
Hackett Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 2:56 PM
Thanks John, and sew do I
Hackett Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 2:56 PM
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