Her Thread

Sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust
A willing victim to time’s soft crust
Dulled sergeant stripes lay on the floor
Fading remnants from a worldly war

This old, now lifeless, bricked in room
Is now but a capsule, her timeless tomb
Her future and dreams enjoined in fight
It's here she threaded her rifle each night 

The war years seemed like only yesterday
Still, both them and her have gone away
Yet here in this room Mom's candle does glow
It's here in this room she labored so

Her faint initials still etched in the rust 
Beside her machine she is frozen in dust
That wonderful lady and her vanishing mark
The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/3/2018 10:37:00 PM
Nice, Jerry! Congrats!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 5/4/2018 12:42:00 PM
Kim, and Thank you sew much.
Date: 5/3/2018 7:21:00 AM
Well written, JERRY. Congratulations!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 5/3/2018 1:25:00 PM
Thank you sew much
Date: 5/2/2018 6:06:00 PM
Great rendering here Jerry. Many congrats on your fine win. Sincerely, Elaine
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 5/3/2018 1:25:00 PM
Elaine, Thank you sew much.
Date: 5/2/2018 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations. Novel and well done. Joyce
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 5/2/2018 3:54:00 PM
Joyce, your words are appreciated, thank you sew much.
Date: 5/2/2018 11:51:00 AM
beautifully written Jerry, Many congratulations on your win in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 5/2/2018 1:49:00 PM
Jan, thank you sew much.
Date: 5/2/2018 10:11:00 AM
I so enjoyed this. Congratulations on your win with this well-written look back. Well done!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 5/2/2018 11:31:00 AM
Susan, Thank you sew much
Date: 5/2/2018 8:17:00 AM
Jerry, back to say congrats on this well deserved win. John
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 5/2/2018 8:41:00 AM
And to you I say Than you sew much.
Date: 5/2/2018 7:33:00 AM
Jerry, I love this! A fave! Especially 2nd stanza! Congrats!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 5/2/2018 8:41:00 AM
Kim, Thank you sew much.
Date: 5/2/2018 6:02:00 AM
Well done, Jerry. Congrats on your win.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 5/2/2018 8:42:00 AM
Line, Thank you sew much.
Date: 4/30/2018 7:01:00 AM
Jerry, I really enjoyed this poem, very nicely written around the specified lines. Best of luck in the contest. John
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 4/30/2018 2:56:00 PM
Thanks John, and sew do I
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 4/30/2018 2:56:00 PM
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