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She was still young, just a simple and irksome dilettante. Her airs of arrogance and misplaced confidence were difficult to bear. She played the piano but without an ear for it. She abused her carte blanche, pleased, believing feigned interest was genuine. She was all too easily duped by bona fide politeness and false compliments. Be it avant-garde or baroque, the cacophony she created was no anomaly. Déja vu for the captive audience, it’s a rerun from last year’s crude recital. Guests are stunned and in shock, but too polite to outwardly show ennui. With élan they applaud voraciously ever so very thankful it’s all over. They clamor feverishly so there will not be another void needing to be filled. AP: 1st place 2020 Submitted for contest TEN WORDS TEN LINES 2 sponsored by SILENT ONE on January 14, 2018 - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 1/30/2018 7:54:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Line on your wonderful win with your excellent poem. Enjoyed it again :) Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 1/31/2018 12:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan. Very appreciated.
Date: 1/30/2018 1:02:00 AM
This is great, Line, and I'm sure we have all met someone similarly 'talented' as your pianist. Well done! Regards, Viv
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Date: 1/30/2018 1:11:00 AM
Indeed, such talent can be found everywhere. Thank you for your visit, Viv.
Date: 1/29/2018 2:11:00 PM
Great use of ten words Line.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Date: 1/29/2018 4:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, SO. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/17/2018 12:19:00 PM
So delightful, it's witty, charming and refreshing. I'll admit, I recognise bits my younger me in it!
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Date: 1/17/2018 12:27:00 PM
How lovely. Thank you, Kumkazi.
Date: 1/15/2018 9:24:00 PM
Oh I love the witty irony of your write Line. Skillfully and beautifully done. Captivating from the start and wrapped up with a great pair of closing lines. Excellent and best wishes for a win. ~Susan
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Date: 1/15/2018 11:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. So happy you enjoyed it.
Date: 1/15/2018 11:01:00 AM
I think this is splendid, Line Seems I might know her, lol, Best of luck xxoo
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Date: 1/15/2018 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Mike. LOL much appreciated.
Date: 1/15/2018 12:38:00 AM
- Great one, Line :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/15/2018 12:49:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.

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