Her Soft Canal

The powder of white sand holds her flesh close to his musk pelvis as she gasps with the murmured waves trembling on the coast of a fragrant mouth against a manly tongue, and they lay on hidden grass in an old Ipanema cove where rippling strokes fondle the east and north of her sylph-like curves: amidst the liquid Brazilian dusk, her flowing hair sinks from the lapping of crest in rhythmic grinds; tanned fingers exploring a soft canal of a nymph's heightened pleasure… by the sea- bend, he pulls her creamy thighs like a driftwood sailing afloat upon each quivered abandon while they melt under balmy trees… without the need to speak. ........................... 100 in a ROW contest -- 11
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Thompson Avatar
January 5, 2017 at 10:35 AM
Now that was awesomely sensual. Great job Nette.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Passionate...:D Congrats on your win. Sunita
A   Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 7:31 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "Don't Come" if you'd like. Enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Arnone Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 7:29 PM
Wow, that was hot. Are we talking humans here? I was thinking of seals or sea lions. Interesting phrase, "musk pelvis." ;-0
Trichet Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 6:18 PM
A very sensual write dear Nette! Congrats
Merryman Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 8:52 PM
Nette, congrats on your win with this super sensual write! Love, Kim
Lamoureux Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 9:16 AM
You have a way with words Nette. Congratulations on this tasteful erotic masterpiece
A  Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 11:43 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
Carter Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 11:22 PM
Beautifully done congrats !
Deschler Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 9:58 PM
A passionate piece, so elegantly expressed. I loved that last line, especially... Congrats on the win, Nette!
Miers Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 10:26 PM
beautiful. making love between the tall white dunes. the exhaling sighs and plangent lave of sensuous tide rolling in and then out from the shore.
Poet Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 1:03 AM
You are amazing with your pen.Love this!Wish you a very very Happy New Year!
Bocsa Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 10:40 AM
Well,Shakespeare described England somewhere...as a sensual woman, describing different regions of his country. Certainly,the women know better the wonders .
Fraser Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 12:34 PM
Flight now booked, off to explore the Soft Canals of Ipanema. Stunning sensual images abound, amid the hidden grass, loving sounds. Got to be a winner in the contest with dreamy poetry, James :)x
Devnath  Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 10:46 AM
Nice and loved the line bears the essence "without the need to speak". I feel 7, Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 6:38 AM
witwiw sadyang napakainit na mga salita haplos sa tilamsik ng sifhi ng romansa.. :) flaming hot Nette:)!
Trifiatis Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 4:49 AM
When feelings are abundant in our hearts the best way to be expressed is through actions when this is impossible then comes words as a second choice. When the first is possible the second is unnecessary! Here words describe actions, doing as much justice to them as the ability of the poet in question! A superb poem dear, Nette, that cannot describe the feelings you have aroused in the reader's heart!
Fraser Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:58 PM
This is probably the most fantactic erotic piece I've read Nette. The cold shower now beckons, Carl
Vaso Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:45 PM
I am speechless too!!! I read this again, and again and again..... :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:38 PM
I am speechless Nette! Not to mention breathless after reading this tastefully charged flaming poem! Oh yes, I can see this at the top of the winner's list!
Peterson Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 7:55 PM
One would think that all the whispered agonies of convergent flesh might already have been uttered and expressed over millennia passed. Not so, as you now have shown, and remarkably so.
Kayode Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 7:24 PM
Really? Without the need to speak? What again? Don't we say action speaks louder?My God,save me from the prowess of Nette, this is just too hot for me to hold...truly soft canal...great is the poet that lives in you...huggs
Smith Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 4:57 PM
Very passionate nette...huggs
Fleming Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 1:52 PM
A delightful piece of writing...a little gem!!
Andresen Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 1:47 PM
- Romance of good quality, Nette !!! -Beautiful - Good luck in contest :) - oxox //Anne-Lise :)
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