Her Prescription

with one foot short I was hamper’d
believin' my life was 'ncumber’d
when quite by surprise
'peared a girl with cross-eyes
and proclaim’d I was doctor order’d!



01/18/11
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Date: 7/18/2012 4:11:00 PM
[Is there good news..you got a gal?]Congrad's on getting through the first round! Couldn't be in better company. Light & Love
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Date: 7/18/2012 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your two poems making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Jimbo. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/29/2012 4:27:00 AM
hehe!!
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Date: 1/22/2011 3:24:00 PM
hahaha, this is cute!
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Date: 1/19/2011 6:24:00 AM
Cute one James .. luv the punctuation to emphasize ... good luck in the contest..
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Date: 1/19/2011 4:38:00 AM
I am reading such amazing poetry this morning Jimbo. I am glad yours is among the ones I have had the pleasure to read today. I wish you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2011 1:50:00 AM
Very smart Limerick here dear poet ! I have to add this to mine favz if ya don't mind?? This is one of those great writes Sir ! much love, james
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Date: 1/18/2011 7:55:00 PM
Funny poem, James!
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Date: 1/18/2011 7:52:00 PM
This makes me feel blessed. I was out doing the Lords work today. and this tells me that He was doing His. T. S.
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Date: 1/18/2011 7:46:00 PM
Nice, James lol,,, what a prescription,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 1/18/2011 7:30:00 PM
ah, how SWEET this one is. Great title. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/18/2011 7:20:00 PM
lol! Very funny, James! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/18/2011 7:13:00 PM
Very funny, Jimbo. We all have our shortcomings and people with disabilities are often kinder to each other. Cute limerick. Enjoyed, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/18/2011 5:57:00 PM
Nice prescription you have painted so well, James. Jimbo
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Date: 1/18/2011 5:34:00 PM
lol! v Good one, James.. Lainie
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