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Her Poem

Years later his is alone in a hotel room. The air-condition sings to him, the muted TV blinks its bright eye into a darkened room. It was in a motel room, a room not so well appointed, that a poem came to him, it showed herself to his blindness, It opened and he entered her like a thief. That year he watched as her crushed spirit left on a greyhound bus. No one on that bus recognized her unread poetry. This year here in a hotel alone where room-service comes when called, he recalls trying to write of her once more but that poem will not now come.

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Date: 12/10/2022 2:28:00 PM
I always wonder where these come from, Eric - haunting, sad, and hopefully not from personal experience, but well done, a momentary draw into a dark and unhappy world tinged with regret...
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Eric Ashford
Date: 12/11/2022 12:19:00 PM
Thanks you Jeff for this commentary and thoughts. We poets must keep our secrets while writing of them! Best EA

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