Her Poem

Years later
his is alone in a hotel room.
The air-condition sings to him,
the muted TV blinks its bright eye
into a darkened room.

It was in a motel room,
a room not so well appointed,
that a poem came to him,
it showed herself to his blindness,
It opened and he entered her
like a thief.

That year
he watched as her crushed spirit
left on a greyhound bus.
No one on that bus
recognized her unread poetry.

This year
here in a hotel alone
where room-service comes when called,
he recalls
trying to write of her once more
but that poem will not now come.
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Kyser Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 2:28 PM
I always wonder where these come from, Eric - haunting, sad, and hopefully not from personal experience, but well done, a momentary draw into a dark and unhappy world tinged with regret...
Ashford Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 12:19 PM
Thanks you Jeff for this commentary and thoughts. We poets must keep our secrets while writing of them! Best EA
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