Her Obsession

 
Our love will never die so abandon your soul,
We are on the threshold of unspoken sweetness;
So time to end this facade- my heart you have stole,
Bodies entangle and I am full of weakness.

We are on the threshold of unspoken sweetness,
Oh, we have only one life, let us not waste it;
Bodies entangle and I am full of weakness,
My love for you darling will never, ever quit.

Oh, we have only one life, let us not waste it,
I am obsessed with this sweet fate- I succumb;
My love for you darling will never, ever quit,
Although bittersweet without you I would be numb.

I am obsessed with this sweet fate- I succumb,
This dark love is frightening and unnatural;
Although bittersweet without you I would be numb,
Oh, love this deep, this intense is not rational.

This dark love is frightening and unnatural,
So time of end this facade- my heart you have stole;
Oh, love this deep, this intense is not rational,
Our love will never die so abandon your soul.

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December 6, 2016


Poetry/Pantoum/Her Obsession
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Written for the contest,
Point of No Return

Third Place

darklovepassionsensualpantoum

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Winged Warrior

December 15, 2016 at 4:57 PM

Superbly done my friend Wings...everything you touch becomes a work of art...Congrats!!! to you...god bless...^WW^

Freddie Robinson Jr.

December 12, 2016 at 5:27 AM

Gorgeous pantoum, BW. The passion and the desire is palpable, undeniable. You've penned a classic love poem. Going in the faves for sure. A 7+, baby. Sorry it took so long to get back to your page. There are so many gifted poets/poetesses that I lose track sometimes. Will try to remember to stop by your page more often, okay. Please forgive me. Love this poem though.