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Our love will never die so abandon your soul, We are on the threshold of unspoken sweetness; So time to end this facade- my heart you have stole, Bodies entangle and I am full of weakness. We are on the threshold of unspoken sweetness, Oh, we have only one life, let us not waste it; Bodies entangle and I am full of weakness, My love for you darling will never, ever quit. Oh, we have only one life, let us not waste it, I am obsessed with this sweet fate- I succumb; My love for you darling will never, ever quit, Although bittersweet without you I would be numb. I am obsessed with this sweet fate- I succumb, This dark love is frightening and unnatural; Although bittersweet without you I would be numb, Oh, love this deep, this intense is not rational. This dark love is frightening and unnatural, So time of end this facade- my heart you have stole; Oh, love this deep, this intense is not rational, Our love will never die so abandon your soul. ______________________________________ December 6, 2016 Poetry/Pantoum/Her Obsession Copyright Protected, ID 16-855-596-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Point of No Return Third Place

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Date: 12/15/2016 4:57:00 PM
Superbly done my friend Wings...everything you touch becomes a work of art...Congrats!!! to you...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 12/12/2016 5:27:00 AM
Gorgeous pantoum, BW. The passion and the desire is palpable, undeniable. You've penned a classic love poem. Going in the faves for sure. A 7+, baby. Sorry it took so long to get back to your page. There are so many gifted poets/poetesses that I lose track sometimes. Will try to remember to stop by your page more often, okay. Please forgive me. Love this poem though.
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Date: 12/6/2016 6:14:00 AM
Deep and romantic ... intense and compulsive ... overwhelming ...
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Date: 12/6/2016 6:04:00 AM
oh love this deep, this intense is not ration... you are so right about that! great write !
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