Her Lips

Her hesitant lips, longing for her man unattainable she seems, as she mounds longing for his toasted embers sweat heats, hurts her vision and her skin lust comes in after flow, of his manliness his hand hardest seasons of witnessing behind her soft luscious lips, shes ready outstretched arms hurting, sweat dripping between her eyes in her garden above the throne, she bows her head in love in awe of her angel man.... Brooke Dylan 2014

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Steve Harris

Date: 7/27/2014 11:12:00 PM

Seductively written! Everyone should feel that passion at least once their lifetime.

David Brown

Date: 6/13/2014 3:57:00 PM

Wow! What wonders a humble man could aspire to....beautiful

Brooke Dylan
Date: 6/14/2014 5:39:00 PM

THANK YOU David...

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/30/2014 3:27:00 PM

Fantastic write my friend and it is also a hot one as well. Your pen is mighty!!!! BBBBravo!!!!

Ivo Cos

Date: 5/23/2014 4:25:00 PM

Sweet lips, I imagine!! The way you communicate this is nicely charming. I feel the sensation as real because this is very well described. Lovely and Awesome Poem.

Brooke Dylan
Date: 6/13/2014 4:14:00 PM

thank you Ivo... hugs

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/22/2014 6:22:00 AM

Beauty, passion, and yearning rolled into an amazing poem

Brooke Dylan
Date: 6/13/2014 4:13:00 PM

Thank you Monterey

Jeremy Street

Date: 5/19/2014 3:54:00 PM

Man, that toasted burning embers got me girl! Your beauty definitely has a way with words...Never short upon passion this heart her creativity....Love, Jeremy *

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/19/2014 4:33:00 PM

Jeremy so glad you liked it.. your comment made me laugh..

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 5/18/2014 11:40:00 PM

Enjoyed well.

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/19/2014 4:32:00 PM

THANK YOU