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Reckless and fast paced Love in time displaced By a bitter taste Ardour gone to waste. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - [Wujue - 4 lines, 5 syllables each] Contest: Form ‘J’ Jueju Sponsor: Broken Wings Placed 1st © 22nd March, 2017

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/31/2017 12:04:00 PM

Paul, life in the fast lanes of overindulgence and bitter regrets leaves one lost in the end... an enthralling and alluring write. Belated congrats on your well deserved win my friend. Warmest wishes to you always.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 12/31/2017 3:10:00 PM

Thank you! Yours are very well expressed thoughts, Susan. Life in the fast lane takes its toll on both the physical, mental and moral aspects. ~ warm regards // paul

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/3/2017 12:17:00 PM

Great jueju, Paul! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim

Paul Callus
Date: 4/3/2017 4:25:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. You did very well yourself! Best regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2017 7:44:00 PM

Congrats, you did it excellently.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/3/2017 4:23:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Regards // paul

Constance La France

Date: 4/2/2017 4:22:00 PM

Paul congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju and your image is amazing too ~

Paul Callus
Date: 4/3/2017 3:05:00 PM

Thank you, Constance. Winning feels good...placing first is the cherry on the cake:) Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2017 4:04:00 PM

I tip my hat to you, Paul. Congratulations on your first-place win with this excellent poem!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/1/2017 4:44:00 PM

Many thanks, Carolyn! It is satisfying and encouraging to see poems placing well. I hope you're having a lovely weekend:) Hugs // paul

John Beam

Date: 4/1/2017 6:56:00 AM

Congratulations, Paul. Great imagery and flow with brevity, Well done!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/1/2017 9:51:00 AM

Thank you, John. Your lovely comments are appreciated. Regards // paul

Joseph May

Date: 3/31/2017 9:49:00 PM

Congrats on your win Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 4/1/2017 9:50:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph. Regards // paul

Maria Williams

Date: 3/28/2017 11:56:00 PM

Beautifully written and I love the image Paul, Good luck in the contest.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/29/2017 10:36:00 AM

Thank you, Maria. Best regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2017 7:42:00 PM

Love it. Your theme is a bit like mine!!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/29/2017 10:37:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea...but I prefer yours to mine!! Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 3/27/2017 9:53:00 AM

Deep and emotional, already winner ~*

Paul Callus
Date: 3/27/2017 4:18:00 PM

I think I'll retain you as my personal judge, Eve:) Thank you for the faith you show in it! Hugs // paul

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/26/2017 4:17:00 AM

An expressive Jeuju on the emptiness of being unfulfilled. Beautifully written Paul:-) a fave, 7+ blessings, lynn

Paul Callus
Date: 3/26/2017 11:56:00 AM

You hit on the gist of the poem, Lynn:) Thank you for both the positive comments and high rating+fave!! Regards // paul

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 3/25/2017 10:24:00 AM

I hope this wins the contest. Good luck......AM.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/25/2017 10:47:00 AM

Your faith is appreciated, Afolabi:) Thank you! // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/24/2017 1:18:00 PM

Awesome poem, Paul. The woman in the photo reminds me of Constance. She'll love this! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 3/25/2017 10:47:00 AM

Thank you, Carolyn:) I hope the subject matter appeals to Constance, too. Hugs // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/24/2017 5:23:00 AM

Excellent. Masterpiece of writing. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it

Paul Callus
Date: 3/25/2017 10:45:00 AM

You are too kind, Ravi:) Thank you! Regards // paul

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 3/24/2017 2:38:00 AM

Great write Paul. I haven't tried this form myself yet and I'm sure it is not as easy as you have made it look. Good luck in the contest. This is a definite 7 from me.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/25/2017 10:44:00 AM

Thank you, Elizabeth. Short forms are not always the easiest to write, but I am sure you'll get to grips with this form:) Regards // paul