Paul Callus Poet Jueju

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Her Jaded Passion

Reckless and fast paced
Love in time displaced
By a bitter taste
Ardour gone to waste.

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[Wujue - 4 lines, 5 syllables each]
Contest: Form ‘J’ Jueju
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Placed 1st
© 22nd March, 2017

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Susan Ashley December 31, 2017 at 12:04 PM Paul, life in the fast lanes of overindulgence and bitter regrets leaves one lost in the end... an enthralling and alluring write. Belated congrats on your well deserved win my friend. Warmest wishes to you always.. ~Susan Paul Callus December 31, 2017 at 3:10 PM Thank you! Yours are very well expressed thoughts, Susan. Life in the fast lane takes its toll on both the physical, mental and moral aspects. ~ warm regards // paul

Kim Merryman April 3, 2017 at 12:17 PM Great jueju, Paul! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim Paul Callus April 3, 2017 at 4:25 PM Thank you, Kim. You did very well yourself! Best regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2017 at 7:44 PM Congrats, you did it excellently. Paul Callus April 3, 2017 at 4:23 PM Thank you, Andrea. Regards // paul

Constance La France April 2, 2017 at 4:22 PM Paul congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju and your image is amazing too ~ Paul Callus April 3, 2017 at 3:05 PM Thank you, Constance. Winning feels good...placing first is the cherry on the cake:) Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire April 1, 2017 at 4:04 PM I tip my hat to you, Paul. Congratulations on your first-place win with this excellent poem! Paul Callus April 1, 2017 at 4:44 PM Many thanks, Carolyn! It is satisfying and encouraging to see poems placing well. I hope you're having a lovely weekend:) Hugs // paul

John Beam April 1, 2017 at 6:56 AM Congratulations, Paul. Great imagery and flow with brevity, Well done! Paul Callus April 1, 2017 at 9:51 AM Thank you, John. Your lovely comments are appreciated. Regards // paul

Joseph May March 31, 2017 at 9:49 PM Congrats on your win Paul Paul Callus April 1, 2017 at 9:50 AM Thank you, Joseph. Regards // paul

Maria Williams March 28, 2017 at 11:56 PM Beautifully written and I love the image Paul, Good luck in the contest. Paul Callus March 29, 2017 at 10:36 AM Thank you, Maria. Best regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2017 at 7:42 PM Love it. Your theme is a bit like mine!! Paul Callus March 29, 2017 at 10:37 AM Thank you, Andrea...but I prefer yours to mine!! Regards // paul

Eve Roper March 27, 2017 at 9:53 AM Deep and emotional, already winner ~* Paul Callus March 27, 2017 at 4:18 PM I think I'll retain you as my personal judge, Eve:) Thank you for the faith you show in it! Hugs // paul

Lynn Marie March 26, 2017 at 4:17 AM An expressive Jeuju on the emptiness of being unfulfilled. Beautifully written Paul:-) a fave, 7+ blessings, lynn Paul Callus March 26, 2017 at 11:56 AM You hit on the gist of the poem, Lynn:) Thank you for both the positive comments and high rating+fave!! Regards // paul

Afolabi Muideen March 25, 2017 at 10:24 AM I hope this wins the contest. Good luck......AM. Paul Callus March 25, 2017 at 10:47 AM Your faith is appreciated, Afolabi:) Thank you! // paul

Carolyn Devonshire March 24, 2017 at 1:18 PM Awesome poem, Paul. The woman in the photo reminds me of Constance. She'll love this! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn Paul Callus March 25, 2017 at 10:47 AM Thank you, Carolyn:) I hope the subject matter appeals to Constance, too. Hugs // paul

Ravi Sathasivam March 24, 2017 at 5:23 AM Excellent. Masterpiece of writing. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it Paul Callus March 25, 2017 at 10:45 AM You are too kind, Ravi:) Thank you! Regards // paul

Elizabeth Kinch March 24, 2017 at 2:38 AM Great write Paul. I haven't tried this form myself yet and I'm sure it is not as easy as you have made it look. Good luck in the contest. This is a definite 7 from me. Paul Callus March 25, 2017 at 10:44 AM Thank you, Elizabeth. Short forms are not always the easiest to write, but I am sure you'll get to grips with this form:) Regards // paul

Laura Leiser March 23, 2017 at 11:12 PM Well penned, Paul! I really liked this one...good luck in the contest :) Paul Callus March 24, 2017 at 5:53 PM Thank you, Laura:) Have a nice weekend! Regards // paul

Chris Green March 23, 2017 at 9:20 AM Really nice Paul, a bit dark and lonely but still beautiful. Paul Callus March 24, 2017 at 5:46 PM Thank you for reading and liking, Chris. Regards // paul

Supraja Kannan March 23, 2017 at 6:26 AM This is great... Well penned poem... Good luck with the contest... A big 7... Paul Callus March 24, 2017 at 4:54 PM I'm glad you like it, Supraja...thank you! Regards // paul

Erin A. Charles March 22, 2017 at 6:23 PM This is so hauntingly beautiful and sad at the same time. Sure will be happy to read more of your poetic skills Paul, good luck in the contest. Paul Callus March 22, 2017 at 6:36 PM Thank you for the lovely comments, Erin. Pleased to make your acquaintance. Regards // paul

Jan Allison March 22, 2017 at 6:12 PM beautiful but sad rhyme Paul:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Paul Callus March 22, 2017 at 6:27 PM Thank you, Jan:) I was trying to base this on a fast life of overindulgence. Hugs // paul